Broojo02's sprite comic thread.

This is my first ever comic I made. It will hopefully be one in a list of series.

Pretty good, the only thing I advise you to do is to work on the humor, other than that, it`s good.

Very good, this is your first comic? Wow, you made almost none of the mistakes most people make when they first start. You used speech bubbles, you had a good solid joke, you were origional, you saved it as a PNG, you spelled everything right, and the most important, you didn't make some horrible random thing that no one can understand.

Congratulations.

AM~

Not bad, not bad.
Have guest appearances: People like that ;P

Originally Posted by Solink

Not bad, not bad.
Have guest appearances: People like that ;P

NO, they DON'T! It ruins the comic. Making no sense what so ever to the already non existant plot.

As for you're comic better then most. If your still continuing it, which I don't think you are, next time but a border around your speech bubbles. You really only have to worrk on the presentation of that and it'll be fine.

Originally Posted by Hylian Z

NO, they DON'T! It ruins the comic. Making no sense what so ever to the already non existant plot.

As for you're comic better then most. If your still continuing it, which I don't think you are, next time but a border around your speech bubbles. You really only have to worrk on the presentation of that and it'll be fine.

Ok, SOME people. Happy?
Gotta keep mah kewl *Eats mentos, then stabs himself*
"Mentos, the Freshmaker"
Yeah, you should keep making those comics. Better than some peple, but goes for an average. Just work on the humor (if you want) and you'll be fine....