The Kiza Music Charm

MY first comic!: The Kiza Music Charm!



Pages:

Lost one:{Page 1}added:8-5-06

Meet up:{Page 2}added:8-6-06

Hurry!:{Page 3}added:8-10-06

Deku Tree?:{Page 4} added 8-18-06

tell me: what you think, i know its long, but its my first. and i spent all my time on it! you'll figure everything out on your own, so I won't spoil you! , comment and crit, as I need to get better.

You need to know: I will except guests when i tell you i will. I spend all my time on these, so be nice and wait for the next. Dont spoil others, telling them " but so and so can't do so and so" It ruins the future pages. PLz.

That comic is really cute ^^ heh, I love the "I lost your orcarnina."

Woah that's great. Better than a lot of other comics here. I like the originality and the use of some of your own custom sprites. Very good! Kepp up the good work, I'll be reading.

Quite an interesting first issue, actually. What's up with the charm? We'll have to see, I guess. I look forward to more.

That was very neat!

There were only two things that bugged me: the guy whose legs were shaped after Mega Man, and the white space (I see way too much of that these days). But these are minor complaints. Good job! ^_^

Yes! Anyone who does original backgrounds as good as yours gets about a million points in my book. Very good story, and suspenseful! seven/eight

I must say, these were very good. They do add an air of suspense to it and make me want to keep looking for more XD If they are good in general, they are terrific for being a first one. I think I actually want to see more, which is rare with me and sprite comics.

wow, famous already! i wasn'T expecting much. ^.^ here is:{Page 2}
Thanx for commenting and criticizing. This one took shorter time to make, maybe because no warphole monster? well enjoy, and Question everything!

Originally Posted by Kalimar

the guy whose legs were shaped after Mega Man

he was edited from Link, since i only made one sprite ^.^, Who was he?and will you see him again?... to be continued.

Yah know I have some questions. One is, how do you create sprites? With what?
Next is if someone gives you a character sheet- how do you get the sprites off?
Third what do you use to create the comics? So confusing.....*sorry I'm a retard*
Good work though...

Ah, another good one. I like how the plot is progressing. Of course, I want to know what's going to happen! But I can wait with everyone else. b^_^d

Sparkz!!

I am sure your comics are wonderful!!

But when I go to read them, they are too smal!! The new window pops up, I make the window bigger, and I can't read them still.

I think I am a retard, because everyone else seems to be able to read them okay...

Originally Posted by sjr12

Sparkz!!

I am sure your comics are wonderful!!

But when I go to read them, they are too smal!! The new window pops up, I make the window bigger, and I can't read them still.

I think I am a retard, because everyone else seems to be able to read them okay...

Did you try clicking on it?

I did just now. I clicked on the link, opened the window, and clicked on the image.

*sigh* I can see the comic, but I can't read the words.

My comics have the same problem, hard-to-readness... I guess I can read them easier because I already know what they say

Originally Posted by sjr12

I did just now. I clicked on the link, opened the window, and clicked on the image.

*sigh* I can see the comic, but I can't read the words.

what do you mean? does that little magnifying glass have a + sign on it? if so.... Click on it to get a - sign, it works fine for me try taking a screen shot of what you see. ( press prntscreen on your keyboard, paste, save, and upload ) So i can get a better picture of what you're seeing!!

I figured it out. ^_^

I've never had to press a button before to large-up an image, so that was a first-timer.

Blame it on being tehnologically stupid. ^_^;

Anyways, I loved the first comic, especially when Ki kicked her own shoe at her face. That cracked me up!

your not dumb.. ok maybe a little, But everyone makes mistakes. ^.^

updates I made. I edited on the 2 comic pages, page 1 ... i forgot to add Mr.cursor as a credit page 2 one mistake i forgot was to finish the word bubbles for comic 2 also ... i took off some dialouge, it's more understandable. so you can look, but there's not much difference.