Karlia's Destiny

Ok, here's my very first comic, EVER!! I allow guest stars as well.

Oh Wolf_Goddess, as much as I hate to give you constructive critisism, I must say that if you want to make a sprite comic, then you have to have a hook. Only four panels won't do it. But I have the utmost faith in you! I know that you can make it better!

sounds le this will be a good project...but te panels are waaay to big....unless there are just for this comic

Ok, here's the second page.

It is getting better. you need to make the panels smaller and the text easier to read. All in all, I love your beginning nevertheless!

Good job on it for being your first! The panels do need to be smaller and the text needs to be easier to read. But all in all, it was good for the beggining of a comic!

Hey. i hate to crit But...

you still need to make them smaller. ITs just TOO BIG!!!!!!

The coloring needs work. But its ok.

I like how you guys based the story on a new character like Karlia. I'ts also very interesting to read about, I can't wait for more!

Ooh... JPEG ALERT! Don't save it as a JPEG, save it as a PNG or GIF, please! When you save it as a JPEG, it gets all blurry and stuff. PNG won't do that. As for other problems, don't resize the sprites, get better backgrounds, make the panels smaller, use speech bubbles (I couldn't tell who was saying what), go to Image, make sure their is a check by Draw Opaque, then...make sure that when you are using the dotted square tool to move sprites, the thing under the tools, there is two of them, click the bottom one. It'll get rid of the with space around the sprites...
I really have nothing else to say...

i can't read what the guys are saying in panels 3, 4 and 5

but still good comic

Ok, here's page 3. Oh, BTW, it's not a jpeg, it's jpg.

It is getting better, the story is interesting, and it's Kingdom Hearts. I eenjoy this, just make smaller panels, don't resize the Sprites, use speech bubbles, and save it as a .png

I personally think that you should use textboxes but other than that it's very good!

Ok, here's the fourth page. Plus, I saved it as a .png.

Cool, Sora like Karlia instead of Kairi, Riku also wants her, and she misses Sora and vice versa! I'ts great!

That wizard guy? That's me. Yup. I rock.

Yay! Part four! *is excited* Saving it as a PNG really improved the quality, nice move! It is also really coming together. Good job!

Yay Wolf_Goddess! the sprite comic is getting better and better. Can't wait for the next one. *squeals like a girl*...w-what?