Ghost of Shadow's Temple of Sprite Misfortunes (comics)

Ok well here is my 1st comic. Now before you all bicker at me this was my first time doing anything like this so there are white boxes. Try to ignore them for my next issues shall be white boxless. Enjoy.
A quest for a vending machine. Issue 1


All sprites made at spritefireball.com or something like that. I take no credit except for the placement and story line. Please leave your comments after the beep *beeeeeeep*

The white boxes seriously ruin it. :[ Really good, it's just those accursed white boxes.

You do know how to get rid of them, yes?

Yes but as I said its my 1st and after it was done I forgot I had them on. I don't know if there is a way to get rid of them now.

Ah, okay. ^__^ You could remake the comic. It'd be annoying, but I'm sure it'd look way better. ^_^

It was good at least it was funny I like your style would u like to become a member of the carl weezer project Ghost of Shadow.

Well what do you do? If you'd like to see me you must come 7 stories under Opera House Popular. Well PM me about it and i'll see.

The comic, like everyone said, was actually pretty good, aside from the boxes...Here, read this:



This doesn't review one last thing, though. If the box around a Sprite is a different color than white, use the fill bucket to make it white.

Thanks i'll go redo it now and see how it'll come out.

Ok people here is Issue1 done over without the blanks and all.

Once again I take no credit for any of these sprites.

hmm... It looks preety good but you gotta find a way to stop those white boxes from showing up...

*Applause, applause*

Reign: Much better, GoS, much better.

Kisiro: Yes, bravo, Ghost of Shadow! An excellent redo!

Reign: It reminds me of my first few comics.

Originally Posted by Reign and Kisiro

*Applause, applause*

Reign: Much better, GoS, much better.

Kisiro: Yes, bravo, Ghost of Shadow! An excellent redo!

Reign: It reminds me of my first few comics.

Thanks Reign, thanks Kisiro, and a speical thanks to sprite Tails for the last 2 panels. Tommorow will be Issue 2 which I hope everyone enjoys.

A lot better than the first. ^____^ Just work on seperate panels and such. ^_^

Ok heres Issue 2



All sprites are by Spriters Resource I take no credit. All sprites are copyrights of Nintendo.

XDDD Hilarious!

"What's in that chest, Zelda?"

Funniest. Thing. Ever.

Well thanks to Red Kobra who, through PMs got me to start comics.

Here is #3 enjoy everyone. *note: may not be too funny this time. I was just trying to progress the story a bit*


Small hotdog stand credit to Reign and Kisiro Bigger one credit to Zero Hex. Triforce colored in by me. Everything else from spriters Resource.

XD I found it funny.

They adventure forever for some hotdogs, and then....when they find the HotDog Stand, there are none.

Well its looooooooooong from over. They won't stop til they find some hotdogs.