Pokemon Grey

Pokemon Grey: Just like Platinum, only not at all!

This is a comic that originally started out as a one-shot joke about Giratina. Eventually it evolved into jokes about the entire game of Platinum. This is just a first look before I begin updating on a regular schedule. (Please note that there's no distinction in who's talking. Dialogue will be color-coded in later strips.)

I laughed at the end. It's good.

I like it and the end joke was funny!
I 'd like to see where this comic goes!

So far so good! Keep it up. :3

That was nice. x3 Can't wait for the next part.

I liked it! I always thought that was funny how pokemon can never stray from tall grass. That's a good joke.

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I think I might make the official update day Saturday or Sunday.

Bahaha! That was great! I could read 100 more of these.
If I have to say something negative, I will always say it first. So here: One piece of advice I might give you is that since you are using the box at the bottom rather than speech bubbles, you might want to have the character speaking show some kind of emotion. Rather than facing each other all the time, they could look at the screen, you could draw big eyes on them, make them do some hand gestures, SOMETHING.
But still, it was way good. Your main character is quite entertaining, he reminds me of Mandy off of Grim + Evil. He was funny the whole way through. This is very nice work, and I like you clean spritework. You've got the content all there, now just work on your delivery.

I liked this second ones as well.
But, anyways, why does the red guy hate Fred?

Originally Posted by GoldStud

If I have to say something negative, I will always say it first. So here: One piece of advice I might give you is that since you are using the box at the bottom rather than speech bubbles, you might want to have the character speaking show some kind of emotion. Rather than facing each other all the time, they could look at the screen, you could draw big eyes on them, make them do some hand gestures, SOMETHING.

I plan on moving to the battle sprites (the ones that are a lot more detailed) eventually. Of course, since Rowan doesn't have any of those, I'm stuck with the walking sprites for now.

OMG awesome ( finally someone how hates the rival as much as me)

I like this. =)