Heroes Unite; My First Sprite Comic

This is my first sprite comic. Please reply, I need to know what I should get better at, etc.



I got these all from Spriters Resource. Their creators are Ren "Foxx" Ramos for Sonic, Ryu for Shadow, SemiJuggalo for Link, and Melissa for the Poe.

Quick things to work on:
-Spelling and Grammer
-Those nasty red background clips

But it's ok

Thanks, and it will get better as I go on, of course. I spend alot of my time trying to find certain Sprites: Goron Link, Deku Link, and Zora Link. I can only find little chibi guys.


Here's the next part. I can make these things fast. The better comics will start soon, after Shadow's master has been named.

Thanks. Here's part three.



Here's part 4



And last in this post, part 5



Mario was ripped by Bacon and Rogulgot, and edited by Flare. Saria was made by SemiJuggalo. Super Sonic was ripped by Bonsai. Once again, I got these from Spriter's Resource.

Kool, but sometimes, the panels are messed up

Yeah, I've been noticing those. Thing is, they only appear once they've been posted, but not when I make them on paint.

Anyway, here's the next comic.



Tingle was made by CuccosDominatePigs, from Spriter's Resource.

There are smudges in your panels, and they have a hole in them. But good story line!

As said before, they are appearing when posted, not when being made. I don't know what's up.

Part 7



Part 8



Navi by SemiJuggalo. Shiek by Tonberry2k

NICE ONE, are yo accepting guest stars? if you are, then take this one:

oh and forget about the credit, i made these ^^

It's a pretty good comic, I like the story line, but here are two things to work on:

1.Randome things happen intantly ex. Gossip stone: Some say Sheik knows where to find it Sonic: Who's Shiek *Shiek randomly appears* Shiek: I am. Link: Do you know where the triforce is? Shiek: No but I have the triforce of wisdome Link: That's better than nothing *Link gets triforce.

2. Make text bubbles!! If you need help with that I can tell you how I do mine.

But other than those two things it is really good and pretty funny.

Well, as said before, It is my first comic, and I do need practice, I'll admit.

Text bubbles, huh? Yeah, I've been thinking about that. The next comic, part 10, should have them.

Guest stars are excepted. *Saves Sprite Sheet* His name is Blood Mage, correct?

it is correct. (Can you not make him a bumbling idiot) if you want too you can but i prefer not to have my character a a moron.

Nah, don't worry. Bumbling idiots aren't my stile, unless it's Mario. But, just so everyone's happy, how do you see him? I'll fit that into him.

Oh, and in my last comic, the letter that was from Mario was signed R.A.A.C, correct? Well, it's pronounced r-a-c-k, and stands for 'Repeatedly Appearing Annoying Characters.' Meh, I couldn't think of anything else.

Well, here's part 10.



No, Sonic didn't just dissapear. He's, uh, inside Kirby. *Looks at all the disgusted faces.* Think of it as when Goku and Vegeta were inside Buu on DBZ. Except, Kirby's stomach is somehow able to digest anything.

Kirby was captured by Rogultgot, and Sonic Kirby is my own creation.

I've only been able to read the first three parts, but I like 'em!
I think it was creative to add mario in there; I haven't seen somethin' like that yet.

I like this series... continue it, but dont give up on majoras wrath either

I would continue with Majora's Revenge, but along with school getting harder, my computer goes out alot. And, something's up with my computer, so I can't save writing on Microsoft Word or whatever. Meaning my chaps don't get saved, I gotta rewrite, then before I can post, the computer goes out again. Okay, I exaggerated a bit, but this island's power goes out more often than my sister annoys me. And that's alot.

This is pretty funny, but needs work. But, who am I to critique? Mine sucks harder, and I havn't even posted it yet!

Yeah, I know it needs work. Anyway, here's part 11.

can I be in? His name is I-mag
Oh god, it resized it. tell me if when you open its still small ill edit it tomorrow (im tired *yawn*)