[Puck] Aiko's Trainning

Originally Posted by Puck

Why did you use a comma here* when a semi-colon would work better?

a) I'm mentally retarded.
b) I went to the kitchen and when I came back I simply typed something completely different from what I had in mind before going to the kitchen.
c)PENIS

choose
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Originally Posted by Puck

Wouldn't standing up require moving? Then why tell us the same thing twice?

I had some difficulty in formulating this sentence. If I had put that she simply stood up it would sound like that by the time I finished the sentence she was already standing, which wasn't my intention.
help me. orz

Originally Posted by Puck

You mentioned the marble before...why tell us again?

Cause it was so awesome that I felt the need to tell about it several times in my post.
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Originally Posted by Puck

Twice as cute as a bear or a squirrel?

a) I'm mentally retarded.
b) I went to the kitchen and when I came back I simply typed something completely different from what I had in mind before going to the kitchen.
c)PENIS

choose
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Originally Posted by Puck

Staring it for a moment? You are missing a word...fix it xP

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Originally Posted by Puck

Why do you start so many sentences with the word "She"? Don't you think this is repetitive?

a) I'm mentally retarded.
b) I went to the kitchen and when I came back I simply typed something completely different from what I had in mind before going to the kitchen.
c)PENIS

I personally choose a) tho.
kay, now there is 2 The girl lolz

Originally Posted by Puck

Are you afraid of semi-colons? Because one would work perfectly here, yeeesss.

childhood trauma, ye, it sucks

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Originally Posted by Puck

How? The entire room is popcorns.

I DON'T KNOW, OK?!
lol, I thought the same when I was typing that, but the scene sounded cooler with that xD
I'M NOT FIXING THAT CAUSE IT'S COOL, OK?!
but I understand what you said

Originally Posted by Puck

Why are you so awesome?

many years studying and now I finally have time to have some fun (nerdy stuff like rp'ing, but it's still fun)

That picture...of you running from a Semi-colon. It's going into my Sig. Okay? Also i'm guessing C is the correct answer. ENOUGH!

ASSIGNMENT TIME
Okay here's something I've wanted to do for a while. The task this time is to have Aiko Journey to the center of the dome. The squirrels mouth leads to a dark tunnel which connects to a huge catacomb of secret passageways, deadly traps, and weird creatures that must be fended off. I require your imagination here, as the dome is often non nonsensical and totally awesome. End it with Aiko falling towards a pit of Lava.

Restrictions: I want this in First Person view, 1500 word minimum and no more than two commas a paragraph. Also you can't start a single sentence with the word "I". Okay have fun =D