[Safer] Phirestorm's Training

CHAPTER 01 IS NOT COMPLETE.

OoC:
First of all, here's Phirestorm.

Second of all, because that my Vista's writing program suddenly decided that it won't save files anymore, I have to create everything here. Thus meaning that it will start out short, but as ideas come to my head, I'll update ch.01 ASAP. Hopefully, the work at school will soon be finished, so I can prioritize this thread more. Anyways... Heres my training session with Phirestorm.

BiC:
CHAPTER 01: THE ARRIVAL

Abandoned... Alone... Hated... Feared... That is what I am... Nothing but a shadow... Hated by the forces of good for being an spawn of evil... Hated by the forces of evil for seeking acceptance by humans... This planet offers me nothing but sadness and sorrow... But in the last village I was in, I heared a rumor. A rumor about a place where your place between the forces of good and evil didn't matter... And this is my tale about how I found and entered this place... The Dome...

As the wind blowed in the grass, a man in a black hooded robe walked towards an town. The town was mostly made of bricks and rock. The houses where squere without any 2 floor buildings. Around the town was nothing but desert, except for the small area of grass around the town. Inside the town was people everywhere. Some was trying to sell various goods and wares, while others where looking for company, drinks, wares or bounties.

The hooded man, Phirestorm, walked into a local tavern. He made sure to always hide his demonic glowing, red eyes... He knew far too well what whould happen if he took the hood of. As he walked up to the bartender.

"Hello stranger, what can I offer to you? A beer, perhaps?" The barkeeper asked.

"No, I'm looking for someone... A girl named Jenny." Phirestorm answered. "Seen her?"

"Jenny... Nope, can't say I recognize that name... But some-"

The bartender's voice faded as Phirestorm heared malicious voice throught his head:

"Hmhmhm... I see you..."

Phirestorm quickly turned around looking in every direction. No suspicious characters anywhere, except for the person sitting in the corner drinking some kind of red drink. Red wine, perhaps?

"Hey, are you okay?" The barkeeper asked.

"Ye... Yeah... I thought I heared someone... Probably nothing..."

"Well..." The barkeeper continued. "As I said, Vector is the guy you should be asking if you're looking for anyone in this town. If he don't know where a person is, the person most likely isn't in this town."

"Thanks." Phirestorm said.

After being directed to Vector's whereabouts, Phirestom began walking. It didn't take long for Phirestorm to reach Vector's home. And he began knocking on the front door. But nobody answered.
The door was not locked to Phirestorm opened the door and said:

"Hello?"

Nobody answered. As Phirestorm walked in, he noticed that someone was sleeping in a chair near the window. And he walked towards the person, reaching out with he's hand to check if the person was still alive. Suddenly an arm gripped Phirestorm's hand.

"Who are you? What do you want? How did you get in?" The man in the chaired asked, squeezing the grip.

"The name's Luke, I'm looking for a girl named Jenny, the door was open and nobody answered." Phirestorm respoded.

"Luke...? No... Your name isn't Luke... You're lying!" The man said.

"How did you know?" Phirestorm asked, suprised.

"I may not be able to see what you can see, but I can see what you can't." The man answered.

TBC