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Old 02-29-2008, 06:09 PM
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[Altamira]Radkin Blade's Training.

After a week of parting ways with Anna and Vitros, the weary warrior decided to stop and take a rest at a nearby inn/bar. "Imagine my luck!" he said to himself. He decides to grab a drink before he heads off to rest. As soon as he stepped inside, he realized that it looked familiar, like he's been here before, "Hmmn...." he thought to himself. He goes to a nearby table that appears to be the one he sat at before.

After his drink, he decides to head off to the very same room he had stayed in all those months ago. As he lay in bed, he is quite amazed that he wound up back where he met Vitros and Anna. He remembered the time they had fought, immediately his heart started to pound. "That was one of my weirder experiences... outside of the tournament that is...." he thought to himself. "At least it's not likely to happen again anytime soon...." Soon after he falls asleep.

The following morning, he decides to take a walk around the area, as he walks outside, he notices a body of water in front of the building... it was Lake Vitros! It had the waterfall in the middle and the monument is still there, untouched! He is still quite amazed at how he managed to come back, but doesn't have any idea exactly how he did, however. As he's wondering around the area, he notices a flier on a tree that reads "Self-training not sufficient? Come to the dome and train with the best, (Puck) and (Altamira)." "This ought to be interesting...." thought the warrior to himself. The warrior figured that it wouldn't do any harm to give it a try, so he went down to it. As he approaches the building, he notices a male figure standing there, as if he had been waiting for him.

OoC: If it should be longer or I should fix it some other kind of way, let me know. ^_^;
Other than that, what do ya think? =O
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Old 03-08-2008, 10:50 AM
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Re: [Altamira]Radkin Blade's Training.

This just needs to be a tad longer--86 words, to be exact. It's currently 314 words, and therefore under the 400 words I ask for in a first assignment (just for the sake of having enough to get an idea of your writing from.) ;]
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Old 03-08-2008, 12:55 PM
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Re: [Altamira]Radkin Blade's Training.

So... my very first assignment is to make it 86 words longer? =O
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Old 03-09-2008, 03:50 PM
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Re: [Altamira]Radkin Blade's Training.

Yes it is! When that is done I'll get out my read pen and correct it. MmmKay?
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Old 03-10-2008, 07:40 AM
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Re: [Altamira]Radkin Blade's Training.

Yes, sir! I'll see what I can do. ^_^
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