My works. [:

Hm, pretty good. I like the second one from the bottom. Some of them need more flow. Did you use a tutorial on the one with the arrows? I think ive seen a tutorial with that render that is alot like that sig

I really really like the coca-cola one, but that might be because I really really like coca cola.

Originally Posted by DaltonR6

Hm, pretty good. I like the second one from the bottom. Some of them need more flow. Did you use a tutorial on the one with the arrows? I think ive seen a tutorial with that render that is alot like that sig

I was told by a lot of people that my flow is good, and that my main problem is overblending and composition. o.o

Nope, no tut used. I scratched everything except the render and the c4d in the checkerboard clip mask. I was told by a high mod - low inter that tag was sexy. x]

Bradapalooza - Thanks, bro.

Composition and flow are kinda the same idea, because your flow is born from your composition.

If we are doing some c&c I'd say your first one could lose the water line and fish slash plane in the background, and then tilted the yellow line to run from top left to bottom right, maybe added in one more geometric primary colored line in the top left.

The spray on the two left cans is a little to organized and contained, should been a little more crazy imo. Besides that love it.

The brush work is pretty obvious on the white left part on the third one, and I'd say there is too much going on, but some people dig that.

Nothing really wrong with this one, the regret part is slightly hard to read, but it would ruin it to make it bigger and its not particularly distracting. I <3 black and white


I'd drop the jets and leave the bullets, they look a bit like birds.

Originally Posted by Bradapalooza

Composition and flow are kinda the same idea, because your flow is born from your composition. Ah, but composition is the way everything is put together good composition comes from elements used correctly. Depth, flow, blending, ETC.

If we are doing some c&c I'd say your first one could lose the water line and fish slash plane in the background, and then tilted the yellow line to run from top left to bottom right, maybe added in one more geometric primary colored line in the top left. Maybe. o.o

The spray on the two left cans is a little to organized and contained, should been a little more crazy imo. Besides that love it. Thanks. [:

The brush work is pretty obvious on the white left part on the third one, and I'd say there is too much going on, but some people dig that. No brushing. Pattern stamp tool using a custom created pattern. Just one splatter brush.

Nothing really wrong with this one, the regret part is slightly hard to read, but it would ruin it to make it bigger and its not particularly distracting. I <3 black and white So do I. I was told my overblending kind of ruined it a bit.


I'd drop the jets and leave the bullets, they look a bit like birds. Maybeh.

Thanks, bro. [:

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I believe i've already commented on liek, all of these xD