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Old 06-15-2008, 08:22 PM
The bells are very loud today...
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My Poems

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Twinkle

Twinkling
Shining
Brightness above

Shining through
Amber clouds
Inexpressive love

You glisten
You sparkle
You make light bend

When I try to look at you
You leave within my eyes a scar
Impossible to mend

I want to love you
But if I tried
You'd burn me up
On the out-not inside

There is much of you
But one source
When you fall
I have no remorse

Because you'll rise
The very next day
Then we may resume
Our beautiful day

Twinkling
Shining
Brightness above

There is no way in which
I can ever
Express my love



Silence

Silence created me
Silence destroys me
Silence is noisy
Silence ignores me

Silence spins
Silence dashes
Silence diverges
Silence clashes

Silences spreads
Silence is far away
Silence is with me
Silence likes to play

Silence stands around
Silence waits
Silence chains me to the ground
Silence is my fate

Silence never leaves
Silence never stays
Silence always moves
Silence likes to play


Shine

Streams of formless waves come at me
Heating up my skin
Caressing me, pressurizing me
As I float within

I float along with the stars
Feeling light, feeling life, feeling free
Wondering how ever far
It is, from you, to me

I float and think, what can I do
To get farther away yet closer to you

Gravity pulls me
Dark repels me
Stars surround me
And life expels from me

Great lights above, never shine away
May you always shine
Each and every day

Because, one day
I shall say
“Great stars?”
“Can I shine today?”


Now I want you all to guess what these poems mean!

Btw, I'm not depressed, or emo, or whatever. Just bored, and love stars and such.
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Old 06-16-2008, 04:50 PM
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I think that Lunk feels very depressed about not going to meet Asci. He expresses him self with poems.
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Old 06-17-2008, 11:41 PM
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Well, these sure do express a love for astronomy and Celestia.

But I think the first one has to do with the Sun. The others, I'm not sure. Although "Silence" seems to be referring to the Silence as something else, I think.

Very nice good sir.
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Old 06-18-2008, 05:35 AM
The bells are very loud today...
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Well, these sure do express a love for astronomy and Celestia.

But I think the first one has to do with the Sun. The others, I'm not sure. Although "Silence" seems to be referring to the Silence as something else, I think.

Very nice good sir.
Very nice job! But the Celestia part didn't have anything to do with my love of stars since I've loved them since I was a weeeee little child.

But I'll tell you this: The silence one has to do with the big bang theory somewhat... :3
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Old 06-25-2008, 08:50 PM
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Meadow Maze



Harmony filled nights
Blue sky filled days
No shadows loomed over
The perfect meadow maze

People lived freely
Fulfilling one and all of desires
Unleashing love to each other
No un-blooming flowers

There was no war
No battles
No fraught
In the meadow maze
Love is what they sought

Stars expanded the skies
In the evening as well as days
Their lights pierced the eyes
Of millions upon gaze

In time perfectionism became their perfection
But happiness had been tossed away from their satisfaction

They themselves wanted none of the same
Within this meadow maze
But here in this life time
All the meadow was the same

Cups full of death
Mouths filled with remorse gone neigh
They drank and drank and drank

Until their souls themselves sought perfection
But perfection never remained

The perfect meadow maze
You sought to be unignored
Yet your people sought freedom
And that is which you yourself ignored

Because perfection comes with a price
And this your people could easily spy
That price was no difference
Between you
And I


So yeah. I hate perfection so much.
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Old 06-25-2008, 09:07 PM
oh dahng, let's bang.
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Amazing poem, and I want to say I agree with you.
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Old 06-25-2008, 10:21 PM
The bells are very loud today...
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Shineful Love

When I look at you, you look back at me
When I gaze away, you gaze away with me
Our hearts beat as one, one single source
When I get sad you flicker
When I get happy you pulse
When I get angry you brighten
But when I sleep
That's when you shine the most
When I cry, you cry along too
You illuminate my night, when I'm feeling blue
Crescent light
Shines within your veins
Your energy is my saddle
And your warmth is my reins
Lets ride away together
Leaving a trail of star light
It can be today, tomorrow, or forever
Within each others subconscious
Is where we take flight
So let us go
Let us fly away
So we may shine
Pulse
Beat
Cry
Sing
Soar
Skim
And Love
Every single day
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