My Zelda Poems

Hey guys, this is Link101Hyrule with some poems I did a while back and never got to really share. Ok, here they are. Btw, I could also use some positive feed back on my fan fiction I'm doing titled DarkLight. Ok, now here are the poems:

*A Hero Emerges* (Link's Point of View)-

I am solemn by the morning’s kiss,
Soft nips against my cheeks,
A golden sun; the godly shpere of day,
Stoops low to greet the land,

Nestled in a womb of azure sky,
It sits, adoring in awe its heavenly altar,
The passing of birds,
And the ebbing of clouds,

So obscure the enigma of day,
The fleeting of dark,
And the coming of light,
Two opposite sides of the same coin,
Yet very similar,

Destiny abound on this beautiful day,
A predetermined fate has befallen me,
Where my heart will lead me,
Only time can tell,

A hero emerges!
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*A Hero’s Calling* (Link's Point of View...again)-

I hear the call,
Bitter and sweet to my ears,
The great bow of Hylia sang,
Shrill went the arrow from the silver string,
As it plunged through my enemy,

I hear the call,
The ground is laced of crimson,
My heart beats as one with the Beating
Of my steed,
With sword to my right and shield to my left,
I take my lead to the eaves of battle,

I hear the call,
The passing of winter,
The coming of spring and the heat of summer,
Time has no meaning; only duty,
Yet what does it prove when all comes to ruin,

I hear the call,
The gentle breeze of a golden morning,
And the lonely silence of a murky night,
I hear the call,
That which is bright and true,
The path of a hero is paved with
Sorrows old and new.

Awww...no one likes my poems?

Originally Posted by Link101Hyrule

Awww...no one likes my poems?

First of all, please don't double post. I now you want your thread to get attention, but this isn't the way to go.
Secondly *Moved to Poetry & Originals*. I thought this thread would be best suited in a place where poetry is well read and liked^_^
Thirdly, you only waited for a few hours. Be patient and I'm sure you'll get responces.

-BGS

Originally Posted by BigGoronSword

First of all, please don't double post. I now you want your thread to get attention, but this isn't the way to go.
Secondly *Moved to Poetry & Originals*. I thought this thread would be best suited in a place where poetry is well read and liked^_^
Thirdly, you only waited for a few hours. Be patient and I'm sure you'll get responces.

-BGS

Oh, gosh, sorry! I completely forgot there was a poetry board. Man, I don't remember anything about this place. I used to be part of some other forums and they were way different. Anyways, thanks for the advice and sorry for putting the thread in the wrong board.