First story

[Dragongirl04089]

Ok, this is the first time I've tried this so... just let me know what you think. It is not complete so here it goes:


Is what I feel a constant natural jade? With sudden periods of withdrawl. Sink into a dark sea of depression, feeling the pressure around me. Then return of the natural drunkeness, out of the sea and into an open sky. The feeling of lying on mecury's cloud. Sun gently caressing the face. Then dark clouds aproach and lighrining rockets me back to the bottom of the terrible sea. The routine of my life, my mind, shall never end,stuck in this endless cycle for the rest of eternity. While life continues around me...

[Tenshi_Hyoeyu]

well... for your first story it's pretty good. you should keep writing and mabey you could get a scholorship> hey it's possible!!!