Mother Nature

[Dolphin]

Mother Nature

Your beauty matches that of your symbolic counterpart;
Your divine simplicity and beautiful elegance
Touches my soul and makes my heart bleed love
A design so ravishing with a splash of fluorescent colour,
Giving my eyes a taste of heaven and the beauty of life

Your life’s supporter, life’s upholder
And life’s true passion, and inspirer
Of the superior, your beauty is like a river
That washes over your elegant body
And washes over our lives, you are the fuel for all our passions

O Mother Nature, the diving upholder…
The one who appeases us, teases us and loves us
Who gave us light and passion and fury and elegance and
Simplistic complications right down to every inch of your uninhabitable
Ever flowing beauty and power

This is my first ever crack at poetry, and I'm too lazy to completely refine it. But even so, constructive criticism and general opinions would be much appreciated! :>

[malika]

Specially these lines are exellent.
O Mother Nature, the diving upholder…
The one who appeases us, teases us and loves us
Who gave us light and passion and fury and elegance and
Simplistic complications right down to every inch of your uninhabitable
Ever flowing beauty and power