03-07-2008, 06:36 PM
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my signature is a poem for zelda i made, any comments?
yeah, im lame at poetry, but this one works...
based of OOT 
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in a land of gold light thats beyond mortal sight there lies a great golden power in three golden shards the firey passion, of the goddes din the land, farores world we live in and last but not least, the laws that shine not gold, but blue the shining sky of the goddes, nayru the hero of time on an argeuous quest saving hyrule from evil, trying his best to don a new blade, but little did he know When the blade was unsheathed, seven years did come and go Align with 6 sages, to loan him their might to defeat evil in the one final fight so go now, hero, take sword in hand banish evil, return peace to the land... |
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03-07-2008, 06:38 PM
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Captain Queen Lady Fay -Bring me that horizon-
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O wow ..thats great..hah yah right you're not good at poetry..twas great^_^
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03-07-2008, 06:39 PM
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Wow. That's a really nice poem. Nice job! I like it!
One thing though, it's a bit to long to put in your sig like that. I would suggest making the font smaller, so it doesn't stretch the page.  But really, I would love to see more of your work. It's a little unpolished, but you have raw talent there. Once again, good job!
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03-07-2008, 06:41 PM
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in a land of gold light thats beyond mortal sight there lies a great golden power in three golden shards the firey passion, of the goddes din the land, farores world we live in and last but not least, the laws that shine not gold, but blue the shining sky of the goddes, nayru the hero of time on an argeuous quest saving hyrule from evil, trying his best to don a new blade, but little did he know When the blade was unsheathed, seven years did come and go Align with 6 sages, to loan him their might to defeat evil in the one final fight so go now, hero, take sword in hand banish evil, return peace to the land... |
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03-07-2008, 06:43 PM
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and yeah, unpolished, its hard to rhyme some of that i should make a more polished version
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in a land of gold light thats beyond mortal sight there lies a great golden power in three golden shards the firey passion, of the goddes din the land, farores world we live in and last but not least, the laws that shine not gold, but blue the shining sky of the goddes, nayru the hero of time on an argeuous quest saving hyrule from evil, trying his best to don a new blade, but little did he know When the blade was unsheathed, seven years did come and go Align with 6 sages, to loan him their might to defeat evil in the one final fight so go now, hero, take sword in hand banish evil, return peace to the land... |
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03-07-2008, 06:43 PM
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Captain Queen Lady Fay -Bring me that horizon-
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i like it..so i have to say the truth.
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03-07-2008, 06:45 PM
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in a land of gold light thats beyond mortal sight there lies a great golden power in three golden shards the firey passion, of the goddes din the land, farores world we live in and last but not least, the laws that shine not gold, but blue the shining sky of the goddes, nayru the hero of time on an argeuous quest saving hyrule from evil, trying his best to don a new blade, but little did he know When the blade was unsheathed, seven years did come and go Align with 6 sages, to loan him their might to defeat evil in the one final fight so go now, hero, take sword in hand banish evil, return peace to the land... |
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03-07-2008, 06:50 PM
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That was actually pretty great.
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03-07-2008, 06:54 PM
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Poetry does not need to rhyme.
You should create a thread in the Poetry and Original section to post your poetry. Or atleast read my stories 
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03-07-2008, 09:15 PM
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*moved to Poetry and Writing*
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03-07-2008, 09:59 PM
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ah, thankyou section moderator
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in a land of gold light thats beyond mortal sight there lies a great golden power in three golden shards the firey passion, of the goddes din the land, farores world we live in and last but not least, the laws that shine not gold, but blue the shining sky of the goddes, nayru the hero of time on an argeuous quest saving hyrule from evil, trying his best to don a new blade, but little did he know When the blade was unsheathed, seven years did come and go Align with 6 sages, to loan him their might to defeat evil in the one final fight so go now, hero, take sword in hand banish evil, return peace to the land... |
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03-07-2008, 10:23 PM
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gracias everyone here!
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in a land of gold light thats beyond mortal sight there lies a great golden power in three golden shards the firey passion, of the goddes din the land, farores world we live in and last but not least, the laws that shine not gold, but blue the shining sky of the goddes, nayru the hero of time on an argeuous quest saving hyrule from evil, trying his best to don a new blade, but little did he know When the blade was unsheathed, seven years did come and go Align with 6 sages, to loan him their might to defeat evil in the one final fight so go now, hero, take sword in hand banish evil, return peace to the land... |
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