Quotes...

[Hikaru Ryuu]

Post some made up quotes,poems, and/or short stories (plz comment on my poems and phrases ^_^)


Just some quotes/poems I've started couple days ago (these are the latest though) ...

Cleansed Path

"Your heart, your feelings... how can you feel with no heart, how can you have a heart and not feel. These things, many do ponder on... while the keys to the answers can be found easily, in your heart, your feelings, your thoughts; through your experiances all the answers to your questions will be unlocked with the keys found in your past."

"And always remember your decisions and choices will create new keys, ones that will open doors to future events and experiances... so choose wisely..... and create a new path, renew your personality, and follow your newly cleansed conscience...."

-by me
(tell me what your thoughts are... and I'll be posting some new ones later...)

[alexome12]

cool ones. A bit too long however. Do we post our own?

People who mind don't matter and people who matter don't mind.
-Dr. Seuss

[Hikaru Ryuu]

Originally Posted by alexome12

cool ones. A bit too long however. Do we post our own?

People who mind don't matter and people who matter don't mind.
-Dr. Seuss

Sure you can post your own quotes ... try to make them your own though , I'm just sayin.)

[Hikaru Ryuu]

Just thought up another one , just a little while back...

Captured heART

"To witness the wonderful works that only some may... only at a certain moment and time, people can capture the true beauty of the earth... and share this beauty with others, encouraging them, inspiring them."

"...Instilling in their hearts and minds what true beauty is... what love and appretiation for people, their feelings, their thoughts... that through fine works this true beauty can be achieved, and through your words and and actions, it can be captured, and implanted in the inner-most places of each and every person's heart."

-by me

(I made it up when I was having a conversation about modern arts and digital photography... you know, and how it can take pics of once in a lifetime moments...)...anyways hope you enjoyed it, there will be more

[Hikaru Ryuu]

Another one up for thought , I believe it's more poem-like -

Love's Deep

"A quality that many endeavor to seek and that all seek to endeavor in their own ways.

...an emotion...
its roots stem through all souls and punctures the very heart, causing it to develope wishes, hopes, that affect one's life choices.
And so, causing a person to effect, inspire, the lives of many more... this all dependant on the bearer's decision of applying this miraculous feeling... to family, to neighbors.. to friends, to enemies.. to the hated, to the loved..... But, moreover, to all. Letting this feeling shine light upon anyone who may be lonely, in sorrow, in despair... giving everyone a chance.. to experiance it, and then magnify it....
....It is love.

...a feeling which overreaches and shines beyond the brightest star's radiance...

... and yet is like a star... in causing love's witness to indulge in its contagious beauty and savor this feeling to the fullest extent.

...Is love as the sun's fading out over the horizon? ...Sun can but only be compared to love, to an extent. Unlike the fading sunlight in a glorious afternoon, true love will hold out to time indefinite... and its brilliance, many more times than that of a luminecent morning sun anew."

-by me
(btw... anyone gonna post any of their own phrases/quotes?)

[brokenjoker]

I don't really go for making my own quotes, casue I think I'd fail.

However, I like this one:

"Faith has to do with things that are not seen and hope with things that are not at hand."

~ Saint Thomas Aquinas

[Hikaru Ryuu]

Originally Posted by brokenjoker

I don't really go for making my own quotes, casue I think I'd fail.

However, I like this one:

"Faith has to do with things that are not seen and hope with things that are not at hand."

~ Saint Thomas Aquinas

lol what do you mean? everyone has some inspiration deep down... just give it your best shot... , watch, bet I can top Saint Thomas Aquinas' quote...

Challange to Saint Thomas Aquinas
Faith and Hope?

"Many marvel at the wonders of what they can see, but faith inspires them to believe in air... (explanation: we believe the air is there, on the earth, even though we do not see it)... as feelings motivates one to trust in things of which are unseen, faith will develope from your feelings."
hmm... now about that hope..
"From love and faith sprouts a flower... a hope... that will bloom an eternal beauty... unlike that of a flower's (explanation: flower's what? its hope/destiny) which in time's unforseen occurances will wither away, hope, will last forever... as long as the heart's blazing feelings will be kindled... so will this crimson flower of hope always keep in full bloom...

-by me

(okay, maybe they aren't as good as the Saint's, due to the length and over-explanation... but ill leave the judging to you )
btw... go on give it a try, if you forge your thoughts into that phrase of yours, you can't go wrong ...

[brokenjoker]

Haha, alrighty then. I'll give it a try.

I once made a quote that went a little something like this, "What was once told, was once said."

What I meant behind it is, that everyone builds their thoughts and words off of something that was already previously stated. You know what I'm saying? XD

[Hikaru Ryuu]

How true. See... that's how it works ... very nice phrase.

And ya I get it, kinda like history repeats itself, (lol but the moral of that history quote was to take a look back in the past so that we may not make the same mistakes that once had occured in our lives... I really gotta follow that moral sometime.... so many mistakes on my math tests lol)

...Anyways, liked your quote , and keep it up, you'll be a poet in no time

(btw- hmm... for the next challange, try to string some phrases together, like add something to better relate about your quote... and soon, viola, a poem )

[Hikaru Ryuu]

Worthful Impressions

"Like winter's blizzard snow, quick in decent,
stranger's eyes, showing false truth,
caused relentless confusion in what they truly meant;

Though, inviting, such were these eyes,
Gave way to indefinite sleep through the stranger's gaze;

Now caught away in a dream,
the snow clear, blank paths lay uncharted;

No obligations,
opinions forming a creation,
your conclusion reached too soon;

And yet, this path, so swift discovered,
so swift arrived destruction;

Influenced, this path was,
by others and their habits, molded it was;

Like one's hope gradually crushed,
caused so gracefully by a fool's love, trust, and overconfidence in their false friends,
in what one may have considered honest and loyal associations;

But, for the sake of one's soul not to harm,
light seeps in through the snow-covered burial of bad habits,
giving way to a new hope, renewed conscience;

For death, this feeling experianced,
through a glance into a stranger's 'grey' eyes;

Cry out now, in joy,

For the truth is that there is much more worth in one's life than what can be only observed through a simple first impression,
...that can be found by a mere glance through a stranger's eyes."

-by me ^_^ (latest one yet)

(anyone got poems/short stories/or made up quotes that they wanna post? Oh, and please tell me what you think of this poem... i will accept complements, criticisms, and advice )

[Hikaru Ryuu]

"What is a friend... a dedication made in the deepest parts of your heart, that seed's itself in your inner-most feelings and thoughts... to share and treasure a close relationship with the people you love... to experience feelings that are only exposed through this dedication..."
-by me ^_^

[Lady Fay]

Originally Posted by Hikaru Ryuu

Worthful Impressions

"Like winter's blizzard snow, quick in decent,
stranger's eyes, showing false truth,
caused relentless confusion in what they truly meant;

Though, inviting, such were these eyes,
Gave way to indefinite sleep through the stranger's gaze;

Now caught away in a dream,
the snow clear, blank paths lay uncharted;

No obligations,
opinions forming a creation,
your conclusion reached too soon;

And yet, this path, so swift discovered,
so swift arrived destruction;

Influenced, this path was,
by others and their habits, molded it was;

Like one's hope gradually crushed,
caused so gracefully by a fool's love, trust, and overconfidence in their false friends,
in what one may have considered honest and loyal associations;

But, for the sake of one's soul not to harm,
light seeps in through the snow-covered burial of bad habits,
giving way to a new hope, renewed conscience;

For death, this feeling experianced,
through a glance into a stranger's 'grey' eyes;

Cry out now, in joy,

For the truth is that there is much more worth in one's life than what can be only observed through a simple first impression,
...that can be found by a mere glance through a stranger's eyes."

-by me ^_^ (latest one yet)

(anyone got poems/short stories/or made up quotes that they wanna post? Oh, and please tell me what you think of this poem... i will accept complements, criticisms, and advice )

Thats nice,
your a great poet!
Keep it up.Im not to good making up my own poems. o.0

[Hikaru Ryuu]

Thanks Faroara ^_^

...anyways, you don't really need to be skilled in "poemism", really a poem is just words that come from your heart ^_^