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Quark Hates Earth
Yeah. I almost never write poems, but on occasion I do. I wrote this one tonight because I'm pissed. I might put up more in time, but this is all I got for now. Enjoy my pain, fools.
I hate it when you say that I’m fine I hate it when you pass me by I hate it when you stall for time I hate it when you lie I hate it when you pretend all is good I hate it when you smile and nod I hate it when you’re really a fraud I hate it when you lie I hate it when you say all is well I hate it when you say you like it I hate it when you know it’s just hell I hate it when you lie I hate it when you stare and think I hate it when you pretend to be nice I hate it when you’re cold as ice I hate it when you lie I hate it when you don’t say what you’re thinking I hate it when you’d rather cry I hate it when your convincing is shrinking I hate it when you lie I hate it when you don’t give a reply I hate it when you think I’m uncouth I hate it when you don’t tell me the truth I hate it when you lie
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02-09-2008, 07:29 PM
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Re: Quark Hates Earth
Methinks something bad has happened. Anyway, it is a fun little poem that wonderfully conveys your hate. I also love your repetition of the last line.
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02-11-2008, 01:51 AM
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Haha I don't know why, but that was a joy to read. It makes so much sense. I most of those things don't really mean anything anymore... And that's a good enough reason to hate them.
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