01-06-2008, 10:34 AM
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The voices... they told me to do it!
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Hylie's Short Poems
This never ending battle begins The war is waged, the countdown starts The one true winner is pure of heart Chun-Li, Guile, Ryu or Ken The players fight to bitter ends The bosses come, defeat looks nigh Dragon punches fill the sky With clashing fists and lightning kicks Forward rolls and backward flips Sumo, boxer or really hot chick The tension's on, spinning bird kick ------------------------------------------------------ The below poems are links to the relavent page within this thread. Dreams of You A Valentines Message Desire Hylie xP
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01-06-2008, 10:56 AM
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I like the title.
The rest is ok I suppose
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01-06-2008, 11:19 AM
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Thanks... I think. Lol.
It did only take 5 minutes to come up with. Maybe that shows a bit. xP
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01-06-2008, 04:42 PM
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Oh, honey honey.
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So it's like... a pretty well written poem with a wonderful rhyme scheme, written about something with very little (traditional) artistic value.
It's fun. I like it : D |
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01-06-2008, 04:45 PM
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heh heh heh, cute
take it a mortal kombat one would be out of the question ;P no, but it was rather interesting as far as poems go especially as you came up with it in 5 minutes
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01-06-2008, 04:49 PM
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Haha. :]
/childhoodnostalgia Saw the title, and just had to read it. |
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01-07-2008, 11:05 AM
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The voices... they told me to do it!
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ZU. Lav is more than worthy with mortal kombat. Just an ongoing thing between us both. xP I guess i should have called this thread "My poems/writings" so i could add more in time. 8)
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01-07-2008, 12:50 PM
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I would've made a sexy chick.
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Well now, Mr. Hylian. Why oh why was I not alerted to Street Fighter poetry?! You know it's a passion of mine!
Anyway, a very nifty little poem there. Not too much focus on anything, just an all round neat jumble of words! Now I'm just waiting for a poem all about the greatest Street Fighter of them all, Ken Masters! He's more than worthy! Just don't let that Vega fellow in here to spoil the fun! ;p Spread the SF love! |
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01-07-2008, 01:30 PM
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Haha. Didn't think it would take you long to find this DK. I was gonna PM you but you're here now. xP
Ken masters... I have a heavy metal song somewhere all about good ol' Ken. I'll PM you the link when i find it. It's somewhere within my vast jumble of songs on my hard drive. 8)
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01-15-2008, 11:10 AM
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I would've made a sexy chick.
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If you haven't forgotten, then I'll look forward to seeing/hearing it!
Ken Masters is one bad mofo. Anymore Street Fighter poems coming our way? |
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01-15-2008, 11:25 AM
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I've been noting down a few bits and pieces for another poem SF orientated. My brains not working today. I'll do something though. Watch this space. 8)
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01-15-2008, 11:27 AM
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That was.....beautiful, lol. No, seriosly it was good, especially if you did it in 5 minutes.
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01-16-2008, 11:15 PM
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Although it's a nice poem, it's based on a game. Nice, though.
*moved it from Originals and Poems*
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02-14-2008, 05:52 PM
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Just a quick notice.
I've decided to write some more stuff and make this a kinda work in progress thing. As i add more poems/writings i'll create links with titles in the first post of this thread. Please see the first post for my valentines message and feel free to poke holes or whatever. So yea, i hope you enjoy the coming works. xP
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02-14-2008, 11:13 PM
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hmm...
... ... NICE... yeah, those poems are pretty thoughtful, like the way the Freedom fighter one rhymes  .
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02-14-2008, 11:25 PM
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I liked it.
 Both very easy and nice poems. Nothing overly deep and meaningful, very nice. ^_^
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02-17-2008, 01:40 PM
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Tears of joy and love I sing, Thoughts of you buried deep within, The feelings running through my mind, Someday I hope you’ll find. I have these dreams of you and I, Are they real or just a lie? This question burns me up inside, I need your touch, your kiss, your kind. I think I posted this one on here somewhere before but I'd like it within this thread too. Also, I'll be moving the SF poem and Valentine poem out of the first post at some point, just to keep it looking neat and tidy. So don't have a go at me when it appears in the new posts.
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02-21-2008, 01:38 PM
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With this special day here yet again, We look at our lives and think... Something is not quite complete, Something is missing. This something is always there, Always reminding us that we have yet to live. Waiting an eternity for that special feeling, Always longing for it, but not knowing what IT is. Love: The most confusing and beautiful thing you'll face in life. No one has the answers, everyone has the problem. (Moved from first post)
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02-21-2008, 01:53 PM
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Hylie has a beautiful mind
I love both of these, they are very well done Quote:
bravo Hylie
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02-21-2008, 01:57 PM
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The traditional rhyme poems are very clichéd, in my personal opinion. The point is, most poems who rhyme aren't nearly as good as they seem they are, in all seriousness. Don't get me wrong, though...
I really like it, but it's just another simple poem, if you'd ask me. On a less important note, I absolutely fancy the theme you've chosen for these particular poems. Very enjoyable. |
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02-21-2008, 01:58 PM
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Aww... Thank you Lav.
Ya know, I'm trying to do more stuff all the time but being kinda new to all this poetry stuff it is a little daunting. xP EDIT: Thanks Mr. Evangelion. Like I said, I'm only just starting out. I'll improve I swear. 8)
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