I love you.

[Marty0]

Just a few french Love Poem's I wrote.

Je t'aime. Vous rendez me le sentir si droit. Je pense à vous au moins des 50 périodes journalières. Je me repose et me demande comment je me suis ennuyé de vous tout le hiver. Je t'aime.
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L'amour est comme a monté. C'est une chose beutiful que vous avez pour sélectionner la droite juste, ou elle vous blessera. L'amour est comme la ruche d'une abeille. Vous devez travailler dur pour obtenir le miel doux de l'intérieur, n'importe ce que la ruche est formée comme. L'amour est comme une épée. Selon le côté votre dessus, il peut être émoussé, ou très pointu.

[Ranil]

Hey, pretty good. I can understand a lot of that, since I speak French. I like what you said.

One tip, though. Make it longer. Poems aren't normally that short. They're usually at least four verses.

[Sugar]

Originally Posted by Yamari

One tip, though. Make it longer. Poems aren't normally that short. They're usually at least four verses.

At least four verses? More like at least four lines, and that's just if they're written in a more traditional form. Haikus, Cinquains, and several free-verse poems, for example, are often very short, no more than one verse or stanza, but are still capable of delivering a very strong message. In my opinion, length doesn't matter at all. In poetry, as with most art, the length or size of the work holds no relationship with its quality.

[Ranil]

Oh, I agree that one verse should be at least four lines. What I mean is that his poem has two verses, two lines in the first and four lines in the second. Sorry if I sounded strange, I'm not used to seeing poems like this.

[CourageWielder]

Uh... could you translate it please? I know how to speak French, I just don't know how to read it.

[Sugar]

Originally Posted by Yamari

Oh, I agree that one verse should be at least four lines. What I mean is that his poem has two verses, two lines in the first and four lines in the second. Sorry if I sounded strange, I'm not used to seeing poems like this.

And I mean that the length and/or structure of a poem doesn't really matter :].