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Little Black Sparrow
Heres a poem I wrote, tell me what you think.------
Little Black Sparrow High up in the leafless tree you cast tiny shadows on the ground in front of me It is midnight now and I know you feel alone black against the black sky there's no twig that feels like home Listen Black Sparrow for my words may comfort you I have heard you sing in daylight and I've seen you feathers shine too You may think your a shadow all in the darkest black not golden brown, silver grey or ivory white your wings are bright against the moon --The last verse is a little weak.
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12-15-2006, 09:10 PM
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Re: Little Black Sparrow
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