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Old 11-05-2006, 07:44 PM
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Riders of Destruction

A little poem i wrote, used the idea of ganondorf riding a horse across the field for it..


Riders of Destruction

He rides on horesback,
Sword at his side,
Clad in black armor,
He pushes his ride.
His steed snorts out fire,
He himself wears a mask,
Long red hair flowing back,
As he goes to his task.
He summons the others,
They ride near behind,
They all look the same,
All have the same mind.
Their path grows destruction,
Despair is what will follow,
And under the masks,
Their faces are hollow.
They ride across the land,
Clang of metal, terrifying cry,
They will ride forever,
They will never die.
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Old 12-19-2006, 01:40 AM
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Re: Riders of Destruction

Really enjoyed this one, very descriptive, I could picture it very easily in my mind. I like how it's written. I really enjoyed it.
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Old 12-20-2006, 09:39 PM
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I liked it!

I liked it, It generally sounds like how I write poetry.

If you wouldn't mind, could you tell me if you had to find ryhmes/lines/verse for this, or if they just came to you?
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Old 12-20-2006, 10:54 PM
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Re: Riders of Destruction

They actually just come to me. I usually think of two words that rhyme, then make up lines that can use the words. Other times its just trial and error though.
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Old 12-22-2006, 11:12 PM
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Re: Riders of Destruction

I love this poem it feels like this is a personal experience for you instead of you being the person just writing it down
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