Why?- song lyrics

What do you think?

"As her tears fall, the sky darkens.
As her smile brights, the sky lightens.
Why did you lose it all?
Why did you fall?
Look at yourself you ended up with nothing at all?

His blood is my blood and I'm sick of it.
The time passes by and nothing seems to fit.

And I'm still yours truly..."

It's not complete, but I've never shown this to anyone, so...what do you think?

I liked the first section, but I got kind of confused by the "his blood is my blood" part. I really did like it, I could totally see it as the chourus in a song!

Thanks so much! Oh, right, the part "his blood is my blood...". The song is about my father. Let's just say we don't have the best relationship...