my freinds poetry

This is my friends poetry inspired by me and i thought is was good enough to go on the internet. This was all writin by my freind eva and i take no credit. She would like to know what you all think so please post your thoughts on this. here it is....
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when I look at the world from this perspective
I wonder why music is so effective
people hear the words but dont catch the meaning
the words are inside me ringing, screaming
wanting to escape the depths of my heart
waiting to show that they can be a work of art

when the world breaks down and loses its voice
it will grant the people no other choice
than to tell he world how they feel,
this very feeling is too real

the world is spinning oh so fast,
the only feeling is the one I cant grasp (thats my fav. line)
I'm reaching for it, trying so hard
I feel so empty but its too far

finally I slip and fall
trying to hold on the wall
I'm falling with my friends in a circle around me
looking as though they havent found me.
when I think the battle is over and won
I realize that everyones gone