Laughter On The Murder Scene

You're a lyrical genius, my dear. The emotion you place in your songs is vivid every time.

I guess I'll just have to...form a band, or something. Mwaha.

Hah. You should. Bands are plentiful in High School. I think...

Originally Posted by Wolfen

You're a lyrical genius, my dear. The emotion you place in your songs is vivid every time.

A lyrical genius? YOu're the second person who's called me that, and I still can't believe it. Thank you =].

Originally Posted by Wolfen

Hah. You should. Bands are plentiful in High School. I think...

Hah, I'll find out.

It's getting harder and harder to choose which songs to post. Everytime I skip one I feel like I'm abandoning a child, or something. Hah I'm a weirdo =].

Anyway....yes, there are a lot of commas in this song, mostly so that I can remember the rhythm and the melody. I'd take them out, but then people would read it wrong. So...they stay.

Personal Death Threat

I think it might be high time
To pull a little tease, oh sweet temptation
Well just because I did it doesn’t mean it’s getting better

Tied down beaten broken and I can’t move on
My darling,
By the time you read this I’ll be long gone
And I’m wishing I’d never waited so long
But so long….
This night is over, it was over from the start
From the day I handed over
My pawn shop heart and the way you made me smile
Made it okay, for a while but you're gone
And I can’t move on, so,
so long…


Sweetheart, darling, she’s so lovely
Oh where,
Where did you find her
On the street where she belongs?

Can you tell I’m losing grip?
And I’m sick of this ****
And I’m only doing this to offend you,
Oh baby

Tied down beaten broken and I can’t move on
My darling,
By the time you read this I’ll be long gone
And I’m wishing I’d never waited so long
But so long….
This night is over, it was over from the start
From the day I handed over
My pawn shop heart and the way you made me smile
Made it okay, for a while but you’re gone
And I can’t move on, so,
So long…

I could kill you
Just to make sure that I’d
Never feel this way again
And I feel you, you’re still in my heart
And I wish you
Could imagine
To the point what kind of pain I’m in
You knew it from the start
You lied to yourself…

Don’t tell me it’s not over
You promised me forever
You knew it from the start
You knew you'd break my heart
And you lied to your self

Tied down beaten broken and I can’t move on
My darling,
By the time you read this I’ll be long gone
And I’m wishing I’d never waited so long
But so long….
This night is over, it was over from the start
From the day I handed over
My pawn shop heart and the way you made me smile
Made it okay, for a while but you’re gone
And I can’t move on, so,
So long…

Don’t tell me it’s not over
You promised me forever
You knew it from the start
And you lied,
You lied to both of us

Don’t tell me it’s not over
You promised me forever
You knew it from the start
And you lied,
You lied to both of us

o.O How long does it take you to write these??

Originally Posted by Sugar

My pawn shop heart and the way you made me smile
Made it okay, for a while but you’re gone
And I can’t move on, so,
So long…

"My pawn shop heart" Heh... I love that part.
This song is so sad! I hope I never experience something like that.

It's getting harder and harder to choose which songs to post. Everytime I skip one I feel like I'm abandoning a child, or something. Hah I'm a weirdo =].

Hah.. that made me giggle. That is funny...but you aren't a weirdo. A weirdo can't write such great songs. ^^

Originally Posted by Ismene

o.O How long does it take you to write these??

I'll assume you said that because I'm posting them so often. I'm not writing these as I go; I already have them written and stockpiled here. I'm compiling my favorites into this thread. I don't write songs everyday, though. When I do it usually takes me..um..twenty minutes max? I don't really think about it much when I'm writing, I just let the words kinda...flow.

Originally Posted by Ismene

Hah.. that made me giggle. That is funny...but you aren't a weirdo. A weirdo can't write such great songs. ^^

Thanks =].

Originally Posted by Sugar

Made it okay, for a while but your gone

Your should be you're. Sorry, grammatical freak here.

But otherwise another wonderful song. It matched my mood PERFECTLY! I swear, you must be monitoring me somehow. You choose the perfect pieces at the perfect times.

Originally Posted by Hopeless Romantic

Your should be you're. Sorry, grammatical freak here.

But otherwise another wonderful song. It matched my mood PERFECTLY! I swear, you must be monitoring me somehow. You choose the perfect pieces at the perfect times.

Edited. I'm a grammatical freak, too. And thank you =]. I swear, I'm not stalking you. *puts her telescope away*

Kay, I wrote a new song and I really like it. So, I'm gonna have to post it here, amongst all the old ones. Oh well. This one as an odd title.

Can We Close Our Eyes and Wait for Fate to Fall?

You know it’s four AM somewhere
And we’re letting our lives take a turn for the worse
And you know that
No one ever gets what they deserve

Experiences in the third person
What lies below is unnoticed

You know it’s four AM somewhere
When the clock strikes
The soft spot on your heart
And the look in your eyes makes it feel like
This whole world’s falling apart
We’re falling apart

Well force a smile while you’re falling
What lies below is unnoticed

Break these boundaries
Break my heart, I swear I’ll
Never feel alive until you do

For the record
When the sun goes down I
Wish that I could run right back to you

We’re getting better now at living with the things we never said
And please don’t say our fun is over now I’d
Rather have you lie to me instead
Pretend that romance isn’t dead

Break these boundaries
Break my heart, I swear I’ll
Never feel alive until you do

For the record
When the sun goes down I
Wish that I could run right back to you

We’re just wishing
That it was over now
When the sun goes down I’ll be thinking of you

If everything goes according to plan
I’ll still be breathing when you take my hand
Don’t fail the dreams you’ve sheltered from the world, they’re
Waiting to come true

Just like the night you blind me
Three hours to go, and you’ll find me here
I’m waiting for you

Break these boundaries
Break my heart, I swear I’ll
Never feel alive until you do

For the record
When the sun goes down I
Wish that I could run right back to you

....Amazing. Simply amazing. It honestly moves me. I love your brain. Her brain, insaney, not her.

Originally Posted by Who else?

You know it’s four AM somewhere
When the clock strikes
The soft spot on your heart

Actually that's 3 AM for me. I'm a lightweight.

Lovely, just lovely<3
I was reminded of something about myself when I read this song. I suppose I'll tell you about it.. or maybe I already did... *dumdumdummmm*

I love you<3 <3<333

Originally Posted by Hopeless Romantic

....Amazing. Simply amazing. It honestly moves me. I love your brain.

Thank you...you've no idea how much that means to me, the fact that something I've written has an effect on someone.

Originally Posted by Hopless Romantic

Actually that's 3 AM for me. I'm a lightweight.

Hah, lack of sleep does something to you. It makes you spill your heart out.

Originally Posted by insaney

Lovely, just lovely<3

Thank you!

Originally Posted by insaney

I was reminded of something about myself when I read this song. I suppose I'll tell you about it.. or maybe I already did... *dumdumdummmm*

I love you<3 <3<333

*eerie music* I love it when people can relate to my songs. It makes me feel like I'm not just writing them for my own enjoyment. Which I sometimes am, but...hah.
I love you too <3.

Originally Posted by Sugar

I'll assume you said that because I'm posting them so often. I'm not writing these as I go; I already have them written and stockpiled here. I'm compiling my favorites into this thread. I don't write songs everyday, though. When I do it usually takes me..um..twenty minutes max? I don't really think about it much when I'm writing, I just let the words kinda...flow.

Well, no.. I was really just wondering, because it would take me days to come up with one verse! But, yeah... twenty minutes? Wow, that is fast!

For the record
When the sun goes down I
Wish that I could run right back to you

We’re just wishing
That it was over now
When the sun goes down I’ll be thinking of you

This one is bea-u-ti-ful! I almost cried when I read it. Really... you have the magic touch, Sugar, you really do.

Originally Posted by Ismene

Well, no.. I was really just wondering, because it would take me days to come up with one verse! But, yeah... twenty minutes? Wow, that is fast!

Well, it's easy because I've been writing them for so long that I really don't think about how I'm rhyming, or anything. It's hard to explain. But normally when I write, I have a lot pent up inside of me, so it's easy to just let it all out in the form of a song.

Originally Posted by Ismene

This one is bea-u-ti-ful! I almost cried when I read it. Really... you have the magic touch, Sugar, you really do.

Thanks very much dear =]. It's funny that you say that, because I was in an almost-crying mood when I wrote it. I'm not happy that I almost made you cry, but I'm happy that my writing effects people.

Well Tosha... I've read through all your songs posted here, and I'm thoroughly impressed. You really have a talent at forming images with your lyrics. I'll be keeping a look-out for this thread Such far, I've really enjoyed "A Life With an Alternate Ending", and "Can We Close Our Eyes and Wait for Fate to Fall?" really got to me as well. Can't wait to see more of your work, dear.

Originally Posted by Sugar

Thanks very much dear =]. It's funny that you say that, because I was in an almost-crying mood when I wrote it. I'm not happy that I almost made you cry, but I'm happy that my writing effects people.

No! It was a "good" kind of crying. It is amazing how your songs can bring about emotion like that. And you're welcome, dahling! ("h" intended)

Originally Posted by Andúrhil

Well Tosha... I've read through all your songs posted here, and I'm thoroughly impressed. You really have a talent at forming images with your lyrics. I'll be keeping a look-out for this thread Such far, I've really enjoyed "A Life With an Alternate Ending", and "Can We Close Our Eyes and Wait for Fate to Fall?" really got to me as well. Can't wait to see more of your work, dear.

Well, thank you! Once again, I"m flattered, and glad that you enjoy my writing =]. I'll be sure to keep posting my songs here.

Originally Posted by Ismene

No! It was a "good" kind of crying.

Oh. Carry on, then. <3