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10-25-2005, 08:23 AM
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juss something
baby its love when i look into your eyes
its love when i look back and start to cry its love when i hold your hand and feel secure its love when my heart is hurting..and ur there to be my cure its love when ur the only one to relieve my pain its love when ur there to protecte me fromt he rain its love whn i sit in my room and wait for the phone to ring its love when u have realized so many things its love when u hold me like a gutar its love when u play the strings, and ur eyes shine like a star its love whn u cant undertsand but u undertsand why u cant understand its love when ur always there to hold me by my hand its love cause what we have is real and its love cause inside its a diffrent feelin 
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10-25-2005, 09:01 AM
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Re: juss something
umm, your spelling you Your, you, and guitar is horrrible, fix that and you poem works as a whole quite nicely.
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