Songs i wrote

Blinded By Sulfer

Verse1
Your blinded from sulpher
Acid blinding your eyes
Can't see nothing
The world is going dark
Taking a look at the last things
You will ever see

Chorus
Can't see anything
Wandering about
Not knowing where you walk
Not seeing a thing
Can't tell whether you're
Alive or dead
Fallen victim to the waters of hades

Verse2
Taking the unknown road
Can't see a thing
Screaming from the acid
Burning the very flesh from you're eyes
Frantic for your life
Can't see a thing


(Chorus)

Bridge
What did I do
To deserve this hell you put me through
No sleep at night
No food in the day
No Hope for life
All it will be is
Wandering without a reason

(chorus)X2

(solo)

(outro)




Fuel for the fire


Verse1
Smell of toxic fumes
Fill the air
Pitch black smoke
Suffocating everything in it's path
FIRE incinerating all
That stands in it's way
Plenty of fuel to last
Till nothing is left

Chorus
Fuel for the fire
Kills all within it's grasp
Flames licking out of every nook, crack,
and cranny
Fills the air
All dying from inhilation

(slight speed up in tempo)

Verse2
SUFFOCATION
From the blaze
Fueled by the unknown
Nowhere to run or hide
From the flames of
UNKNOWN FUEL
Can't find a way out
From the unkown burning of fuel
Smoke fills yor lungs
The only light is from fire
SUFFOCATION
(chorus)X2
(solo1)X1
(bridge)X3
(solo2)X2
(solo1)X1
(chorus)X3
(solo3)X2
(solo1)X2
(solo2)X3
(chorus)X2
(solo1)X1
(outro)

there metal songs

how are they

Whoa, very dark stuff you have there! 'Fuel For the Fire' was was interesting, but I don't write lyrics so it is hard trying to come up with good points and bad. But anyway, I enjoyed the chorus for 'Fuel' as well as the second verse.

yah,my stuff does tend to be dark
it metal though,i wrote another one,i just have to revise it before i post it

Originally Posted by darkylinky

(chorus)X2
(solo1)X1
(bridge)X3
(solo2)X2
(solo1)X1
(chorus)X3
(solo3)X2
(solo1)X2
(solo2)X3
(chorus)X2
(solo1)X1
(outro)

there metal songs

how are they

What is this song like.. forty minutes long?

Heheheheh... fine songs, but i think there's another place to post it. Not sure, i'm not!
U got future anyway.

Originally Posted by milk

What is this song like.. forty minutes long?

That's kinda what I was thinking. Maybe if I could actually hear these songs, I'd be able to give an opinion.

Originally Posted by milk

What is this song like.. forty minutes long?

no
fuel for the fire will be more like 11 minutes long

solo 1-guitar solo
solo 2-bass solo
solo 3-drum solo

i havent recorded or sung it yet
i dont have a band together yet
thanks for the comments