A sadish poem I wrote

The Stray Child (I couldn't think of a good title for this poem O_o)

I see people come and go
Most haven’t stayed as long as you
Why are you fading…?
Will you come back to me…?

Alone and sad
I wonder around
Mopping and mourning my love to you
Why does this have to happen to me?

The Stray Child
Is what I am
I bring pain and suffering to everyone…
Why have you not admitted yet?

You always cared about me
I felt safe when I was around you
You made me smile and made me forget…
I was the stray child

Now I can only dream and hope…
Dream for us together again…
Hope for the good…
Why must this reality hurt so much?

The Stray Child
Is what I am
I bring pain and suffering to everyone…
Why have you not admitted yet?

I need you back
Come back and kiss me in vein
I miss you being with me…
In my heart…

Am I really the stray child?
Though my heart aches for you back
Save me…
From my prison of darkness…

I want you back
I need you and only you
I only care about…
You and only you

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I want to know what you all think about it. ^^

Thats really good, Guardian of Twilight. Personally, I didn't get much entertainment out of that ; but I know some other people will. Your a brilliant poet, and its not sad at all.

I thought it was ok. For some reason I didn't really like it. I guess it just isn't the style of poetry yet, keep writing though.

I thought your poem was good. It's very wistful in places, which were my favorite parts. Especially the last three stanzas. Hope you post more!

Its a beautiful poem ^-^

I have to say, thank you four ^^. This poem I did while I was just writing down my feelings and thoughts. But anyways, I shall post another thread that would hold all of my poetry in it ^^