Songs!

Alright i'm kind a new but my friends say i'm ok, so I figured i'd try it so here I go.

Link.
Links in green he's all that you seen running by sword sheild slashing up the big deal. Whats the trouble? Gannon again he'll be rubble! Link's got his sword on the path with his horse and a monster in half! Gannon gonna go lose he has no real cannon. Link gonna save that world he is the hero of our fave have. Give it up to the man in green he really is the best teen. Give up to the man in green he really got skill to bean out. His name is Link and he is all power with his triforce he's gonna beat that Gannon in an hour. So he's Link.

It's not that good but I need have some atleast ok talent here. Anyway you decide on your tune since i'm not recording it with my guitar. If people like my songs i'll write more.

Reminds me of the 1980's, back when 'Saved by the bell' was considered 'cool'. I'm gonna tell you straight out that your lyrics were painful to read. I was hoping I could read some 'secondary meaning' into your lyrics (like 'beware of nostalgia') but I couldn't. This is stuff even a dad wouldn't try to rap. I'm sorry, but that's how I feel.

Don't be discouraged though. Noone starts out as the best and noone's perfect. Just keep practicing and learning and you will improve.