poems, stories, and more :3

these are my best poems
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MY POEM:
Lonly people liked him
others didnt this is a story
of a boy and an annoince.

It's a tiered day
as a boy walked by
he found a balloon
and popped it.

Now this boy had
a bad day and when
the ballon came down
a man fell to the ground.

Come he called to whom
he thought was a fairy.

He said his name
which was Tingle
said he was selling
stuff and boaring
stuff too.

The boys name
was Link he got
annoyed and put
his foot down.

It squished Tingle
but he didn't care
he liked it that way
now he didnt have
to pay.

The moon no longer
frowned but smiled
was no longer scary
but happy

we are so happy
you were there Link
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Hero:
I had a dream
a hero might
come saving
me from evil.

I had a dream
a hero might
come love me
and stand beside
me.

I need a hero
to fight whith
all of his might
so he will let me
be the light.


The light of
his heart.
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Rain:
Rain is good
Rain is bad
Rain makes some
sad.

Dribble, Dribble
Drizzle, Drop.

The rain has
stopped and left.
Some hope it may
come again.
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tell me what ya think dont be rude constructive critisisum and kind words are appreciated
no bad words and rudeness wont be tollerated

thank you,
Rosette

Not bad. I think you need to work on your spelling, though. The first poem had quite a few mistakes. The second and third were all right, though.

Rain is...interesting...<.< Dribble. ^_^

oh ok ill work on it thank you for the info