My Golden sun storys

Title: Party at isaac's house
isaac im gonna make a aughh wtf ahhhh
felix:*gives mute virus back to isaac*I CAN TALK AGAIN!
isaac:sais in sign luagage lets just put thee virus in a jar -_-
felix*puts virus in the jar*
isaac: okay at the party we'll put link's mute virus in the jar and put all the mute viruses in in ganons baby bottle so when he drinks his poisened milk he'll choke and die.

narator:some thousend years later

megaman:time to use my on/off buttom to go into hub soul
roll: oh no
isaac: oh no
link: oh no
coolaid guy: oHHH YEAAAA *looks around*.......
everybody: oH NO
hub: okay my hub soul is on
jenna:megaman put your clothes back on and howcome you have no bottom front?
hub:im a navi i never was programed with one,why do you think navis never take a wiz.
hub: okay if hub soul is anoying ill go to my other soul.....
bass soul: IM IN BASS SOUL
bass and gospel:we told you not to wear it,its ugly on you and its a shame to the bass family.change or i will kidnap mia
piers:*frees mia with phynergy* pervert -_-
kagome:sorry im late
felix:weres inuyasha?

*a cutscene of inuyasha trying to flush the toilet cuase he made poo but doesent know how*

everybody:lmao

megaman:know what?i took off base soul
everybody:.....think we care?
roll:atleast now that hes weak i can shut up his spam with tape*puts tape on megamans mouth*okay now that he shut up lets party.
mia:*rips off tape*
megaman:IM FREE!
ganon: *cant talk* hhhhhh
felix:it worked
isaac:*uses move to carry ganon out of the house*
felix: okay lets gets party startin light show time
flashman*does light effects for the light show and and does turn tables.

everybody but link:*dancing there butts off*
link: Pokes ganon with a sharp deku stick thats pointed

THE END

uh grammar, do you use it?

honestly i can't understand the story line

This story is in dire need of so many things. First of all, make a coherant plotline. Second of all, don't write it like a retarded AOL chatroom, write it out like an actual story. Third of all, use proper grammar and spelling.

Moved to Misc. Writing.

Originally Posted by KWSN

uh grammar, do you use it?

honestly i can't understand the story line

I believe the writer of this piece wants his grammer... to.. be... uh... "a new wave", "breaking the rules", "going beyond common expectations"

Originally Posted by Quicksilver

I believe the writer of this piece wants his grammer... to.. be... uh... "a new wave", "breaking the rules", "going beyond common expectations"

Thats the stupiditst thing I have ever heard.

Your trying to say, that this story is poorly written, because it's abstract? Uh, no just no. In fact, heres a defintion of abstract for you:

1. Considered apart from concrete existence: an abstract concept.
2. Not applied or practical; theoretical. See Synonyms at theoretical.
3. Difficult to understand; abstruse: abstract philosophical problems.
4. Thought of or stated without reference to a specific instance: abstract words like truth and justice.
5. Impersonal, as in attitude or views.
6. Having an intellectual and affective artistic content that depends solely on intrinsic form rather than on narrative content or pictorial representation: abstract painting and sculpture.

after reading i thought to myself, 'what just happened'. no story line, gotta work on that. and do my eyes deceive me or do i see a family guy joke in your....um your...'story'