You (my song)

This is a song i did i hope you like it


Verse 1
You always think i'm cool
But i am nothing but a fool
It was you who made me feel this way
There is nothing left to say

Chrous
Did you ever care for me?
Was you ever there for me?
Now i feel really great
But was it all too late?

Verse 2
I know friendship never ends
But if i had a party would you attend?
You say i'm cool, that you care
But will you allways be there

Chrous
Did you ever care for me?
Was you ever there for me?
Now i feel really great
But was it all too late?

Verse 3
You never believe a word i say
I feel like this everyday
I have good talent and good skill
Unlucky dreams what's it mean?
You can never beat my skill

Chrous x2

Tell me what you think i don't mind if you tell me it was good or bad or what i can improve on for next time.

cool,you wrote this you're self?

Its very good keep it up, but instead of "Was you ever there for me?" did you mean "Were you ever there for me?" that line struck me, because the 'was' could have been diliberate, reminded me of jazz.