[Act] Rise of Syn (T)

Kyle sits on the rooftop of the mansion, looking into the sky. "How long has it been?" He asks himself as he looks at his arm. A scar that runs along burns as if it senses Kyle's memory. "Well, Dark, you got your revenge, Amati is dead."

A voice is heard in Kyle's head sounding serious. "Yes, but if you remember there is someone else----."

Kyle gets up and jumps off the roof and walks into the door. "Whatever. I'll deal with it when the time comes." As he enters the door, he throws his cloak onto a shelf.

Saki walks up to Kyle. "Dinner's almost ready, Kyle." She said as she walks toward another room.

Shi sits on the couch staring at the TV. "Stupid kids at school."

Kyle glances at Shi, then goes into the kitchen and tosses his sword downstairs. "Hello, Fuko."

Fuko looks up after placing dishes on the table. "Oi, baka." ((Hey, moron)) She walks past him. "What's up?"

Kyle looks at her. "Not much. Where's Misa?"

Fuko glances at him and sighs. "Basement."



Kyle heads down into the basement. "****ing darkness. Misa?!"

Next Episode: A NEw Threat.

Misa looks at Kyle strangely. "what, dumbass?"

Kye catches his breath. "We have a problem on our hands." He said seriously.

Misa looks at him with a semi-caring look. "Enlghten me."

Kyle's eyes turn to the Mangekyou Sharingan. "I'm sure you remember Amati."

Misa glares at him."Don't stare at me with those eyes, boy. And yes, I do." She says as she look at him normally.

"Well, it seems that he has backup. Right now, they seem to be inTasogare, but we don't know if t's him, or just some lackeys." Kyle says as he holds his head.

Misa sighs. "We can never ge rest can we?"

Kyle looks at her and chuckles. "Not at all."

Mairya approaches Kyle. "Dad, did you say Tasogare?"

Kyle looks at her. "Yeah."

Mairya gasps. "That's where Ai and..."

Kyle puts a hand on her shoulder. "Mairya, don't worry. San can take care of them."

Next Episode: San, the Ryuukage.

Outisde in a field in another village.

Mikura looks up as her ears twitch and she growls slightly.

San looks at her. "What's up Mikura?"

Akira looks at San, then Mikura. "Probably another wolf."

Mikura glares at her.

Akira looks at her and smirks. "What is it now, kitty?"

San looks at them. "Both of you shut up."

Akira looks at Mikura. She doesn't have to growl at every wolf scent. She thinks quietly.

San glares at her ". . ."

Akira looks up. "I'll be quiet now. I'm gonna go chase people." She says as she walks off.

San looks at her ."Have fun with that."

Mikura dashes behind San ,her ears moving back.

San looks down. "What's up?"


Mikura points in the direction of north and begins trembling. "Evil..power...that way...."

San steps forward. "Mikura, go inside and tell everyone to stay there. I'm going to stay and have some fun." He smirks as he pulls out his magnificent-looking blade.

Mikura nods and runs inside.

Meanwhile at an unkown location

Jin looks at a sillouhetted (sp) figure. "So, are we ready?"

The figure looks at him, then steps out of the shadows. "Yes, Jin, now we head to Tasogare." He pulls out a demoic lookign sword and chuckles evilly.

Next Time: Twlilight vs. Void.

I like the concept of this story, however it's really lacking in details and any character backgrounds. If you could work on even putting a bit more details into whats going on, the surroundings, etc, it would help the reader visualize what's going on.

Good start, though.