Ive decided to write some stuff. im going to write 10 poems, then a story chapter, then 10 poems, then a story chapter, then 10 poems, etc.
Poem #1:
Just Last Night
I couldn't fall asleep last night,
because the moon was much too bright.
And while I was still wide awake,
I cooked myself a juicy steak.
When I was done with my steak,
I thought I'd jump into a lake.
I swam in the lake for about an hour,
and then I got a superpower!
The power to fly fast and high.
So high that I was in the sky!
And once I had to save the town,
and they gave me a golden crown!
It all gave me quite a fright,
and it all happened just last night.
So tell me what you think!! I want some criticizm. good and bad. i thought of that in about 5 minutes.
P.S. hopefully only good criticizm though