Lucifers Falling a poem about the devils fall to hell

i wrote this about a year ago. enjoy

LUCIFERS FALLING

Blood was my vengeance only to betray me. The gates do not whisper but shout the words of redemption. I cried to the angel only for the eyes’ to look away. I fell deeper, deeper into the twilight sky…

I was dambed.

Memories wisping like souls to the chains of echoing prisoners. Away they went, casting their sorrows at my heart, I was crippled in my own deceit. No callings of joy or happiness, callous was me, my thoughts, my hands no longer held the power, which I once achieved. The Sky’s reddened. my pupils grew great with fire. Chaos was my destination, my path, my choice! Hell was my new boundary, my home. No words could I Apprehend. My mind was clouded. The singeing heat pierced me. I was here now. I could feel my new prison, my cell. This black sun witch burned my heels with every step. But they will follow me. I will entice them with my evil howl.

I am lost forever in hate and fire.

Well, the words aren't bad, but the physical composition of the poem takes away from what it has.
Also, you fluctuate in verb tense, which makes it a bit awkward, and you misspelled a few words.

Try re-composing it into stanzas and see what that does. Nice imagery, though.