13th'd Poetry...

Alright here are some of my originals.

Shoot, bump, pass
I've seen it all
All on the court
But never in class
Always on the ball
And in every single sport
Blonde and blue
Always in pink
Pretty, funny, smart
Standing true
Thoughts meant to think
Can I be the start?

What is wanted?
What is not?
Questions asked
But seldome answered.
Why be taunted?
Why be shot?
Questions asked
But seldome answered.
Shall we go?
How are you?
Questions asked
Always answered.
Do you know?
What is new?
Questions asked
Always answered.

Beauty comes
from all around
inside, out side
left side, right side.
Beauty to me,
Beauty to you,
Beauty to them,
its different all around

Yeah, I'm no good with titles.

I dont even like poetry, but this is awsome!

I have to say, they're pretty good. I can't say much, but I feel there's something about the second one that could use work.

I like the third one, which is a very understanding message. I hope to see more.

What solink said!

Yeah! They were okay. For me, I never do poetry unless I have to, like at school or something. :/

Very nice.

Always in pink

I laughed.

Listen listen listen
Thats all there is to do
Help others with there problems
Keep it all bottled up
Listen listen listen
Thats the way it is
No one really cares what the listener knows
They just want to make sure that he
Listen listen listens
There are problems of his own
But no one else does care
But thats alright
Because the brave little listener
Just does what he does best.
Listen listen listen

Here is another one.

Aint dat da trute.

Well, I thought it was very interesting for a first time, correct? It certainly is better than anything I am capable of !

All I have to say is keep practicing, and don't stop writing.

By the way, did you have to do this for a school project?

Originally Posted by Green-Link

By the way, did you have to do this for a school project?

He's actually trying to impress a girl with them. That, and for fun.

Yeah Solink pretty much summed it up.

Smash crash
Up to a wall
Day after day
Same old same old
What's there to say
A kick here
A punch there
Who really cares
Get beat down
get back up
Thats all there is to do
If you tell want to tell someone
Think again
Because the second the authority
Turns their back
Smash crash
Over again
Harder every single time

I honestly didnt think you could write poetry. No offence.

Originally Posted by zeldamaster17

I honestly didnt think you could write poetry. No offence.

Alright then, thanks.

I like!

The second one though, i kept reading thinking that it would say "never anwsered" but it works both ways very well.

Always in Pink

Lol, yeah, thats true.
Good stuff.

You know 13th, there's something about that brave little listener that reminds me of you good work. Good work indeed

Psyco
Freak
Loser
Words thats all they are
No need to change
The being you truely are
Your not behind
Your not slow
You just keep your pace
Because someday you'll be laughing
And rub it in the face
The face of all the ridicule
And all the punishment
Will scream and shout
While you jump about
Loving who you are
Because when you rush
Or do dumb stuff
Just to fit in
It'll blow up in your face
And you'll br worse off then before.

This poem is sehr gut

It really amazes me how my poems turn out.

Nothing to do
All the time its said
What a lie!
What a joke!
There are millions of things that one could go through
Instead of sitting ther like lead
You could play you could buy
You could chat you could soak
Tons and tons
Of fun things to do
And we sit and we think
And we sit and we lie
But thats what its all about
We gotta hold ourselves back
Cause if we don't
We'll have to much fun
And that would be bad
Because we would forget
About all the pain and suffing
Thats all around.

Very nice poetry! You have a great gift, keep up the awesome poetry and I look forward to reading future poems!

there pretty good i like the one with that starts out with psycho, and you can see the message in them, dont be afraid to go deep and write about other things to because most of them seem abit school related.