Rob's Poems

well yeah im not any good at writing but ima use this thread for any peoms and stuff I make.


Now my first one is about past realtionship I had

"Stuck In My Heart"

I have this girl stuck in my heart who wont go away,
I have to let go but I want her to stay
The distance was so great, and our love so strong,
Love over the internet, did I do something wrong?
If only we lived closer, to bad lifes not that way
"this world cant tear us apart" I used to say
Now we are not together but we were,
I know its hurting me but its killing her!
Its to far away, just to much to bear,
Why does it have to be this way? Life just aint fair!
My heart is broken and hers is to
I cant seem to let go, I dont know what to do
Looking for love, we gave it our best,
but miles away, its one hell of a test
Shes still my friend now, I love her so much
Im going to make sure, that we stay in touch
We will see each other someday, but I dont know when
I do hope that one day, we can try again.


By Rob

Next poem is

"The Blue Sky"

"If your ever sad and alone, just look into the sky and think of me
Just gaze upon the clouds and you will see
And when im going through a hard time I will look up to
I will stare at the clouds and be thinking of you"

By Rob


Im working on another one

btw the first line says "i have this GRIL" should say girl, might wanna fix that.

Yeah, the opening line is supposed to go "I HAVE THIS GRILL STUCK IN MY HEART, I LONG FOR YOU FRIED CHICKEN IT HAS TO GO AWAY BUT ITS SO FINGER LICKIN' GOOD I WANT IT TO STAY"

I made a ****ing spelling mistake get over it.

Now for my next poem.... I just started writing so Im bad at it and I dont know any poetic techniques yet. But ima study up on it and be a great writer someday!

"Alone"

I am a man who walks alone

I have no one to turn to and nothing to call my own
I lay here thinking
Is this the way I wanted my life?
Broken dreams are something ive grown to know
I lay here thinking
Whatever happend to my friends?
none.
No friends, no enimes

for I am a man who walks alone

years of solitude have brought me pain
sometimes I just wanna slice my vien
oh please god help me!
Im going insane
have you abandoed me aswell?
Im willing to risk salvation to escape
from isolation
if you have forsaken me then I shall do the same to you

I am a man who walks alone

Music has become my drug
god I would do anything for someone to give me a hug
I have no to share my secrets with, no one to share my pain, no one I can depend on.
just a wastleand that is my world
if I was to cry out would anyone hear me scream?
No one cares in this unforgiving world

I must bear my burdens on my own,
for I am a man who walks alone

by Rob




"Final Shot"

Gun up my mouth, and I think I should
ready to pull the trigger, but I dont know If I could
I have to leave now, im going away
time to say goodbye, theres nothing left to say
im leaving all your ****, im leaving all your hate
this pain you have givin me, im leaving I cant wait
No reason left for me to cry
just close my eyes and say goodbye
no reason left for me to fight
the final shot was heard in the night

By Rob

Ah one about suicide nice... they could be worse... I suppose well, just keep going with that... I'm sure they'll improve

This one is free verse

“Secret”

I have secret hidden deep within my essence
Behind one thousand steel bars it lays
Like a cut that will never heal
Ill bleed forever

The guilt still haunts me
With every passing second
The demons lingering in my thoughts
I scream silently in the winter’s darkness

How could I do this?
I was so young
No one but me will ever know
So I wait here

Waiting
Wanting
Feeling

The seasons wither away
The wind dies slowly
And so do I

By Rob

lol I know its bad -_-

"And so do I" ruins the poem... if it weren't already, I didn't read all of it, but that's not a great ending btw I say re-write that.

your poems need a little more funk

I agree with GAARA OF THE FUNK, ETCH ETCH ETCH ETCH GAARA-OF-THE-FUNK, your poems could use a little more.

Well Rob, personally I enjoy you're poems. Keep it up my friend.

if i may...
there is nothing wrong with his poems, even tho they're spelling mistakes its alright...

Originally Posted by OmegaLifeGod

Yeah, the opening line is supposed to go "I HAVE THIS GRILL STUCK IN MY HEART, I LONG FOR YOU FRIED CHICKEN IT HAS TO GO AWAY BUT ITS SO FINGER LICKIN' GOOD I WANT IT TO STAY"

You stereotyping anus-face.

I don't like them. They're too, down. It doesn't really make me happy at all. Although, if you had extraordinary writing ability, I wouldn't mind. But you don't. A good example: Edgar Allen Poe. The man writes incredibly depressing stuff, but his works are brilliant.

It's not just a spelling error, there are plenty of grammatical errors and whatnot. What really did me in was in that, "The Blue Sky" poem, you said "your" instead of "you're." That's the most annoying error I see online. The word, "your," is possessive, you can't own sad.

Originally Posted by Forte

You stereotyping anus-face.

I don't like them. They're too, down. It doesn't really make me happy at all. Although, if you had extraordinary writing ability, I wouldn't mind. But you don't. A good example: Edgar Allen Poe. The man writes incredibly depressing stuff, but his works are brilliant.

It's not just a spelling error, there are plenty of grammatical errors and whatnot. What really did me in was in that, "The Blue Sky" poem, you said "your" instead of "you're." That's the most annoying error I see online. The word, "your," is possessive, you can't own sad.

FINALLY SOMEONE ON THIS SITE WHO SEEMS TO ACTUALLY UNDERSTAND POETRY

I already told you. My poems suck. Lol but I write them anyway

also, i suggest actually READING some poetry before writing it. i still <3 you though rob.

rob, you still awsome even if you dont like your poems, i do, but my poems suck, they're always about love, a curse that i cant get rid of, gah>.<!

These are amazing brother!!! <33333333333333333333333

Cool they are awesome.

Originally Posted by GoddessOfDeath

if i may...
there is nothing wrong with his poems, even tho they're spelling mistakes its alright...

This post made me laugh. I don't think anyone could do this on purpose...

But yeah, what Forte said.

cant blv one of those is about me i love your poetry rob