Experimenting with only One Word per Line

So I was experimenting with putting only one or two words, and made a poem on breathing.

i breathe
a breath
of air
he breathes
a breath
of water
they breathe
a breath
of fire
deep below
their hearts
he breathes
a breath
of dark
without a
meaning
or heart
to scare
away the
frightened
he breathes
a breath
of light
that is
out of
sight
from colors
yellow to
white
i breathe
a breath
of air

Now to the next level, only one word per line :

we're
here
we're
everywhere
in
your
face
or
above
in
space
we
see
we
laugh
we
cry
we
try
we
die
they
sigh
oh
my
we're
here
there
were
everywhere.

And what I want is

Well, at parts it seem like you just hit enter on a part of a line. Some parts don't justify having their own line and it just doesn't work.

True, but for the "we're here" poem it seems appropriate.

I also do not see much of a point with the first poem, it just sounds too broken up. The same may go for some of the second poem but maybe you could look at both of the poems to see what is a better fit. It's not really a good experiment, takes away from the poem itself.