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Autumn Falls
You can read my first published story, "Autumn Falls," here:
http://calliopewriters.org/Issue_121/AutumnFalls.aspx "Autumn falls, The Leaves like gentle rain, Tears falling, falling, Softly singing, 'Autumn falls forevermore.'"
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Re: Autumn Falls
That was very pretty. :3
I'm assuming it has something to do with your published story there? Or was it just a whole other idea altogether. I'm not really into poetry, so I can't really give you much critique - especially seeing how I'm not much of a poet myself. However, I would like to see a second part to this. I kind of feel is had some potential to expand into a bigger, prettier poem. But maybe that's just me. P:
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