Autumn Falls

You can read my first published story, "Autumn Falls," here:
http://calliopewriters.org/Issue_121/AutumnFalls.aspx

"Autumn falls,
The Leaves like gentle rain,
Tears falling, falling,
Softly singing,
'Autumn falls forevermore.'"

That was very pretty. :3

I'm assuming it has something to do with your published story there? Or was it just a whole other idea altogether.

I'm not really into poetry, so I can't really give you much critique - especially seeing how I'm not much of a poet myself. However, I would like to see a second part to this. I kind of feel is had some potential to expand into a bigger, prettier poem. But maybe that's just me. P: