Poems by Quint

I prefer short poems. You either like my style or you don't; you may criticize it of course <3.

Me & you

I fall from the neverending cliff.
I climb the neverending pile.

I give my neverending best.
Because I love your neverending smile.

Not enough use of the word "neverending." :3

Sharp Rew. Very.

I named myself in the topictitle "Shigeru" btw...automatically....sorry. Could a mod change it into "Quint" please ;<?

Time

It's not in my pocket.
Nor in my hands.

Where has it gone?
Oh, it's at my friends.

You are a wit. Or at least half of one.

Really, those writings are pretty cleverly written.

I don't really ever read poems anyway, but I think that a short or long one can be very good as long as it's just done... good for what a long/short one stands for.

A short poem should be quick and witty and simple and sweet, and thats what they are.


STOP BEING GOOD AT EVERYTHING.


Title has been edited too btw.

Books

I barely read any.
I never study one.

So people think I'm stupid.
But life has just begun.

Math

I buy about thirty.
Then divide them by four.

I add in six for me.
And pass out on the floor.

"Math" = best one so far.

That was pure win.

Poems are always best when they are written about what the poet knows most of. XD

I think it is a bit too short for a poem. Though overall it's alright.

Originally Posted by Marluxia

I think it is a bit too short for a poem. Though overall it's alright.

That's pure nonsense. One of the most famous poems is as short as mine:

Roses are red,
Violets are blue,
Sugar is sweet;
And so are you

If you want to criticize me, make sense please. Thanks.

Originally Posted by Quint

That's pure nonsense. One of the most famous poems is as short as mine:



If you want to criticize me, make sense please. Thanks.

Your right. Poems do not have to be long.

But overall, I think your poem is alright.

I felt as though not much thought was put into your poem at all, it felt a bit rushed, unlike the poem ''roses are red.'' Basically I don't think you put too much effort in your poem. That is the impression I am getting. Maybe you should consider taking your time when writing a poem.

Or maybe you do not understand the ways you should/can interpreter them?

If anything, I think the poem "roses are red" is one of the most rushed written poems ever. My sister of 10 years old could make that up.