Poems Written By Solink

On second thought, I have it finished quicker than I thought. This is a response to "Watching it All Burn", in the perspective of the Evil.

The Demon

Take control, do my task,
I am the creature, you are my mask,
I violate your world, I can open your door,
Your mind at peace? Bah, no more!
I do my work, I take your will,
One way or another, you will kill
Their blood, rivers and pools, is my treasure,
Your screams, I must admit, give me pleasure,
You too, can have a monster, in your mind, locked,
I can unleash it, your mentality I have easily mocked
You see, all it takes is one...bad...day
to let yourself loose and the rest decay
Your cares off your shoulders, there is just us,
Enter reality, and spread my word: chaos

Originally Posted by Solink

On second thought, I have it finished quicker than I thought. This is a response to "Watching it All Burn", in the perspective of the Evil.


The Demon


Take control, do my task,
I am the creature, you are my mask,
I violate your world, I can open your door,
Your mind at peace? Bah, no more!
I do my work, I take your will,
One way or another, you will kill
Their blood, rivers and pools, is my treasure,
Your screams, I must admit, give me pleasure,
You too, can have a monster, in your mind, locked,
I can unleash it, your mentality I have easily mocked
You see, all it takes is one...bad...day
to let yourself loose and the rest decay
Your cares off your shoulders, there is just us,
Enter reality, and spread my word: chaos

So...awesome, It's all-around dark. I guess this is way it's named "Demon"
This one is one of my favorites as-well.

Damn, I had to double-post this because the first one didn't come up...

It didn't turn out as "psychologically disturbing" as I intended, but it does have it's dark elements.

Thank you. I'll get to another one shortly...

[I]The Demon
Your screams, I must admit, give me pleasure,/I][/COLOR][/QUOTE]

This poem is awesome.

My fav part of the poem. =)

Solink, you horrible little bastard. Not only are you crazy, random, insane, funny, and semi-retarded, but you're deep as well!?

DAAAAAAAMN YOU!!! I think we may be twins...

But good job...All my "critiques" have been covered already, so uh...keep it up.

I know "ahead" and "ascend" isn't much of a rhyming pattern, but I felt the need to put it. I also used more metaphors, as Kassi suggested.


Wind

Gone from the grasps of reality
Feel the grace of the finality
Never look back, only ahead
Free, body and soul, ascend,
The flying force, maintaining your hair
Dart to the sky, over the clouds is where
Keep running, you will not fall
The power within will guide it all
Set beyond, white thunder, run free
follow what you know, what you can't see
I have no name, I have no face
Matter it not, aim above my pace
No need to look, no need for sound,
Just feel: your destiny is found

Originally Posted by Lunchbox*

Solink, you horrible little bastard. Not only are you crazy, random, insane, funny, and semi-retarded, but you're deep as well!?

You forgot "smart" XD

I do believe you mean intentionally left out instead of forget. You should probably edit your post accordingly.

Originally Posted by Solink

Wind

Gone from the grasps of reality
Feel the grace of the finality
Never look back, only ahead
Free, body and soul, ascend,
The flying force, maintaining your hair
Dart to the sky, over the clouds is where
Keep running, you will not fall
The power within will guide it all
Set beyond, white thunder, run free
follow what you know, what you can't see
I have no name, I have no face
Matter it not, aim above my pace
No need to look, no need for sound,
Just feel: your destiny is found

Wow.....It's titled "Wind" for good reason, Makes me want to run with the wind without a care.... v.v

~Beautiful Poem, man wish I was as good as you

I'm gonna be awfully busy for the next week or so, and I doubt I'll have more than 4 poems by then.

If anyone wants a request or contribute an idea, feel free to ask.

Wow my dear, you are really good! I am melting! <3
I think Looking for Her and Deamon are my favourites!

My heart is filled with poetry,
while I am sitting under a broken tree,
listening to the angels sing.

This is my passion, my destiny,
riven between dreams and reality,
all written down with a black feather.

I do believe a trade off should happen now. *points to Unknown Album*

Originally Posted by Solink

Vanessa

Watching through those timeless eyes
Reality vanishes, all around seem like lies
Blue, like the ocean, drifting so free
My feeling, unexpressed, trapped within me,
But as I look at your hair, like a blazing rain
Paralyzed and struck, what shall remain?
Riding that fire, that strikes like a dart
Touching the sky, limitless from your heart
Send me forth to beauteous embrace
I remember no more, give me your pace
So look at this poor mortal soul and give a sign
Vanessa, please be mine

This has got to be my favorite. I really like all of your poems. Keep up the good work. I can't wait to see your future poems. :3

Time

Silence, fade in, fade out,
What is its meaning about,
Let it pass, or value each minute,
Each fraction, each future in it,
Focus, whether it is feeling or vision,
Your mind and the world, wrapped in collision,
Memory, freedom, know your limit,
There's only so much to dim it,
You want more, you want less,
Rushing and waiting, giving it a mess,
Why is it so? An unsolved mystery?
Think no more, that was history,
Don't go back, no what-coulds or text,
Instead, look ahead and what happens next

Its a really good one and shows the message really good.

Hmm, haven't done one in a while. I was just thinking of Rorschach from Watchmen and listening to some songs from Paradise Lost (note the references in there) to make this one:

Rorschach

Shift...shift...
Mystery within, none can lift,
Stare all you want, observe my sight
The truth, the lie, told in black and white,
Injecting the venom, do not delay,
My face, meaningless, what more to say?
I live behind the perfect mask, a symbol of my life,
No grey or mix, nothing collided with strife,
Unexpected drifts, making a balance,
The colorless blotches, dance and dance,
The black void, like soil, reflecting the worms I see,
The purgatory beneath, the shallow mind of thee,
Lost and paranoid, a child within,
Disguising his tears for every man's sin,
With these inkblots, away from humanity,
In my own reality...in my own reality...

Shift...shift...

Into the window of your soul.

It's nice, tho, I don't think I can appriciate it to it's full potencial since I don't know either of the two things mentioned.

Originally Posted by Solink

This is one I wrote for Bee some time ago.
Finding Her

Every While
I will smile
On that mile long
I can remember
Like a January ember
Her voice can seem like song
I cannot see
I cannot go
But to me, I feel I know
Whenever I see her show
My madness will flow
It's odd to think
You've others more to think
I feel my mind will not respawn
With you, I can think
Better without me to sink
To my break of dawn

wow, you are so good! I like this poem the best! you really got the talent, good for you!

Originally Posted by Solink

Hmm, haven't done one in a while. I was just thinking of Rorschach from Watchmen and listening to some songs from Paradise Lost (note the references in there) to make this one:

Rorschach

Shift...shift...
Mystery within, none can lift,
Stare all you want, observe my sight
The truth, the lie, told in black and white,
Injecting the venom, do not delay,
My face, meaningless, what more to say?
I live behind the perfect mask, a symbol of my life,
No grey or mix, nothing collided with strife,
Unexpected drifts, making a balance,
The colorless blotches, dance and dance,
The black void, like soil, reflecting the worms I see,
The purgatory beneath, the shallow mind of thee,
Lost and paranoid, a child within,
Disguising his tears for every man's sin,
With these inkblots, away from humanity,
In my own reality...in my own reality...

Shift...shift...

Into the window of your soul.

Great work, I can imagine Rorschach saying that.

Really great work, Solink.

Originally Posted by Solink

As for January Ember, I liked the sound of both words in a sentence, so I added them.

Niiiiiiiiice.

Meh, your poems are aiight.

Do I sense sarcasm with that remark?

Thanks anyways.