Deep Thought Poems (Warning, could hurt your brain)

I am very good at writing deep poetry, apparently

So like, here we go, a couple poems.

Originally Posted by Cascading Ice Interior

Calm is the winter mind, sweet as the ice in which it rusts away warmth
Come unto self which is thou's remorse so does the dust of regret settle
Searing images pierces this one's mind, as he imagines the forth told horrors of his past life

He is reborn from the star dust, another entity entirely his own, but created from the masses of death
Strange worlds venture past, many lights query his presence but simply pass by as he soars
White are his pupils as the suns fail to burn the interior of his heart

Grandeur of lifetimes have passed and worlds of which have never seen his light are revealed by it
Meaningful circumstances unite those with a soaring breath of hope

Exuberantly, a shimmer of magnetic rebirth touches his mind, and his heart
Slowly melting the death of him
Cascading the ice interior within

Pupils white, and fire within, he soars
Transversing across fields of star dust and mountains of cosmetic rebirths
Strange worlds sigh in relief

Astray the world he once knew sits, ablaze
Within it's side sits a extraordinarily sized boulder
Spreading death and might across the once old world
Renewing the evil

For now, he soars
Hope still in his heart, he seeks for the reborn world another day
As the thoughts stir, it cascades the ice interior within

Originally Posted by Rapture Of The Mind

Swarm the mountain tops upon neons
Grasp tightly ahold the atmospheric rays of light
Crescent flower upon a hilltop, moonlight enshrines you

Twinging leaves on a street corner, footsteps in the folly of thought
Sweeping across a transdimensional onlooker; akin to surprises

Sway with the wind; Sway with your mind; Sway with the stars in the sky
Creation begins; rapture of the mind

Admit it's defeat, the wind learns today
Sacred is heart; Diamond decay
Grazing abide, the shadow is it's own

Fire erupts from hearts, I see this with my mind
Ice cannot cool hurtful thoughts; only suppress them

Grandeur is creation; Grandeur is it's vane; Grandeur with the stars in the sky
Creation subsides; rapture of the mind

Adrift with conceit; fearful cries
Skys upon stars; Stars upon skies
Strangers they come; akin to surprise

Fray with your mind; Fray like fraxinus ashes; Fray until your own mind is in ashes
Creation now dies; rapture of the mind

Critique would be nice

I am being completely honest here. Lovely. Very nice. I loved your choice of words, and how the poem was like abstract thoughts. Good job.

Thank you! These take me so long to do and require much headaches and thinking strategies, and I'm glad SOMEONE noticed