A poem just for...

A forgotten soul,

a twisted way,

a silent voice,

a unheard day,



this pain,

its taking its tole,

this pain,

its digging its hole,



my love,

is shoved away,

my love

is ungrateful,

my love ,

it doesn't pay,



time,

you say,

time,

i haven't any,

time ,

if i could buy more,

i would,

but i haven't a dime,



Angels,

swing on a silent tree,

High enough to reach the sky,



just thinking of you ,

it makes me cry,

just thinking a thought,



something tells me that

this is the day,

something tells me that

now is the time,



weather you know it or not,

weather you care,



angels fly,

angels tell me,

they whisper, not shout,

as you did on those last few words,



their words are soothing

and comfort,

their words help me

and tame my unforgiven soul,



they help me,they do, to

understand myself,

they help me see the

truth in someone else,



they nudge me and guard me when its right,

they protect me and watch over me in the night,



angels are there,

unlike you,

angels are there,

and always will be,



they know the best just for me,

they understand me

and don't see through,



angels are dependable,

unlike you,

-written by Rebeka

I really like this, good job, I hope to see more,


By the way, if you plan to post more poetry, I reccomend using one thread for all of your new works, it is easier for everyone and you

Aaah, why does this remind me of me? I know it sounds cheesy and I say this a lot, but I can kinda relate to this poem... if it means what I think it means.

Anyways, nice job! I hope we get to see more form you! The only mistake were a few typos but those don't really matter, everything else is great.

So yea i think imma use this thread for my Poems. This one is Called

"Consumption in your past"

You can hear its cries
you can feel its shove
its push
its scratch
you can love it
to the point of death
you can show it
that you care
that you want it
you can drag it out
and throw it deep
6 feet under

but yet someone years upon us
will feel its presents
will care'
will love
and will show it to fear no more
then Barrie it in shallow too damp d..soil
with a stench so horrible
the stench of death
the stench of murder
the stench of rotting flesh
and burning skin
and then someone even more years upon us
will fine the remains
and be consumed by its past.
By Rebeka

this onr is called Dear father



Hello Father
Dear father,
Hello father, how are you?Hello are you listening? Listen now and hold your peace,listen now and I'll tell you. Forever will I think of you, forever will we be. Forever are you there?! Forever to me. Listen to me father, and forever hold your peace, you need to forever hold your peace. Listen now and I will tell you. Those others don't know what they say. Forever hold your peace. Speak up father, or forever hold your peace. Here and now. There and then. It will never end. Listen father, listen now, or forever hold your peace.
Love you here,
Love you then,
Sincerely, Forever hold your peace.

Your poems are AMAZING! Such great work. I loves your poems...............

Disable -(a weird one,,tho they are all weird)

Disable my words
disable my love
disable my fear

hurrying
searching
for someone

to come save me
from the darkness

to come save me
from my self

I loved all the poems. All I have to say is that you need to find a spell checker. Other then that, keep up the good work!

Hello! Sister I do Have a spell checker on Safari thank you sis. Lol You have already read theses poems

Here is a new poem. Iam trying to learn German so i thought i'd see how well i did. So if ya speak German please Help me XD (im not that good anymore) It's Called Ich Liebe Dich

Meine liebe ,
Verzeihen Sie meinem Zorn,
Und verzeihen Sie meinem Hass. Verzeihen Sie allen Schmerz,
die ich Sie setzen kann vergesse durch alle Schmerzen,
dass ich die ganze Reue durchlaufe Dass ich in meinem Herzen habe In meiner Seele Mein Stolz Er kann ihn nicht mehr nehmen!
Mein Herz! Es bricht langsam! Meine Seele schreit für Ihre Liebe!
Ich liebe dich.
Bitte don' t vergessen mich.