Echo of a Dolphin (M)

OK, um... first off, this is an in-progress story I've been writing. I'm not sure if I'm allowed to simply post the link to the story, but it's written on another website, so bear with me if it's against the rules or anything.

Echo of a Dolphin

So, yeah... I'm sorry if I was supposed to past the text of the story itself into this forum, but this just seemed so much easier, given its potential length. Forgive the story's... suckage... I'm not particularly good at writing, but I just felt like doing it anyway, and I tried my best to keep everything grammatically correct and consistent. So, read and comment, please. For those that do read, thanks very much for putting up with my mediocrity.