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Old 01-05-2008, 09:15 PM
YesmaR YesmaR is a male Israel YesmaR is offline
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My poem, "The Wolf"

When the Wolf howls
A beautiful song is sung
but no one hears it
When the Wolf cries
A mighty river is born
but no one sees it
When the Wolf dies
The Earth splits in two
but no one cares
the Wolf stands
He stands tall
and He stands alone


I would just like to say that this is the first poem I have EVER written. So I am an amature. But that is my poem.
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Old 06-18-2008, 04:47 AM
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Re: My poem, "The Wolf"

Wow, Thats Really Beautiful! Whoa~ A DUDE that can write poetry! Youre Not Gay, rite? Cus if You arent The This could go in ripleys(sp?) Belive it or not!!!
HAHAHAHAHAHA

(Oh yea, just in case you ARE gay, NOT SAYING I THINK YOU ARE!!, I Wasnt trying to insult you!!)☺☺
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Old 06-18-2008, 04:59 AM
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Re: My poem, "The Wolf"

Wow, I like it a lot. Great job.
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Old 06-22-2008, 06:23 PM
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Re: My poem, "The Wolf"

It's pretty good for a first poem. I think after some practice you'll be pretty good. And if you need/want any help along the way, PM me and I'll see what I can do for you.
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