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Preludes of Insanity (A collection of Poems)
These are what I consider my best works, and as I filter through the rest I might add a few more.
By Kyle Peltier Your red raspberry lips You eyes alight in a smile Our souls were joined If only for a while And he came along This toxic parody A direct mocking of the universe Meant only for me His jostling phrases His malignant smile In me, threats of jealousy started to compile Your loving looks once only for me Were then given to this toxic parody Faster now, my hatred grew And I made malicious plans But never followed through I considered you trust worthy But my faith failed, And you left me, For this toxic parody But now this fool is gone Killed by car like a fawn Looked both ways but did not see The hatred driven me And now together we will be Without this toxic parody My facade By Kyle Peltier How can I live this life, How can I breathe. Why must my life flicker so, Why don’t I bleed… Can you help me learn to breathe. Hush now, don’t worry. It’s just anxiety, Why must this they tell me Why wont I bleed… The brightness and joy in me Are only something make believe. An act so those who worry, Can’t read, My pain… The sharp prick, The cooling pain. Now I bleed… Darkness take me away. Can you help me learn to breathe. Hush now, don’t worry. It’s just anxiety, Why must this they tell me Why don’t I bleed… Sit close By Kyle Peltier The sky is lit my love, By a moon as bright as the sun. And in your eyes, The crimson tides Seem to be no more than a sailors fear. And in the rain, Or in turmoil and pain, I know I have your ear. So sit now close and still, And in love together, In happiness forever, All sadness will be stilled. The True Elements By Kyle Peltier The four elements plus one are none The four joined against the fifth Prismed Prismed into life Light is life The element that exist in all but none Red is fire eternal burning Blue is water forever babbling White is air ceaselessly blowing Green is earth endlessly birthing Black is the void always consuming Light is spirit perpetually blissful The spirit was consumed by the void The void was filled by the spirit Forever dancing are Yin and Yang Forever battling is light and dark Forever melding are void and spirit Forever is forgotten The Eternal balance is forgotten If one conquers the other The seed is reborn In Yin there is the seed of Yang In Yang there is a seed of Yin In Light there is shadows In the Dark there is luminescence In everything there is its opposites seed The balance is reborn The elements separate Light is not pure Separated is light Blue, Red, White, Green Water, Fire, Wind, Earth Void ever present ever lingering Waiting for the Dance Waiting for the Battle Waiting for the Melding Are the Elements
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04-22-2006, 02:42 AM
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Re: Preludes of Insanity (A collection of Poems)
I would accept some feed back, if you all would care to give it.
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05-07-2006, 03:38 AM
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Re: Preludes of Insanity (A collection of Poems)
I have filtered out another one I think would be nice to share.
BY Kyle Peltier I look out my window at the dawn. A new day, a new hope. A chance to further my life, A chance to follow a path of my choosing. An opportunity to be beaten, An opportunity to be ridiculed. But I have hope. I have hope that the world will see my suffering, Hope that I will gain their love, Hope that I will gain their respect, Hope that I will gain their kindness. I have hope as I walk down the cold cement hallway, My hope shatters as I hear their voices calling My hope shatters as I am ridiculed My hope shatters as I am taunted Taunted on this ground. The ground that is dedicated to education and the future generations Supposed to be the breeding ground of the worlds future This is not the breeding ground of hope This is not the breeding ground of education This is not the breeding ground of a better generation This ground instead spawns conformity Instead of a better generation, it develops a generation under control They are told how to act, and look by the media They are told how to think by the standards the government sets. They are taught to fear everything unique They are taught to hate everything different. They are taught that those who do not conform deserve punishment. That I deserve punishment. But I will not yield to this conformity I will not yield to their believes. I will continue to explore I will continue to learn, not because they tell me too, but because I thirst. Because I thirst for the truth Because I thirst for my rights Because I thirst to be unique Because I thirst to be appreciated Because I thirst to be an individual Because I thirst for my voice to be heard It seems to me that conformity can be gone in my dreams A nightmare force that swallows people whole Swallows their identify Swallows their soul Making them all faceless lumps Faceless without individuality Faceless without a voice Faceless with hope That only in my dreams can the world awake from this nightmare Snap out of the hypnotic state they are in So that we can be individuals So that there once again will be diversity So that voices like mine are not censored So that voices like mine are listened to So that voices like mine are everyone's Through diversity come appreciation Appreciation for diversity Appreciation for being unique Appreciation for the truth Appreciation for being an individual Appreciation will once again spark the ember of hope Spark the drive to follow my own path Spark the candle that destroys the darkness of conformity Your voices and mine are the flint and steel The powers to set in motion the emancipation of our world Emancipation from being a faceless crowd Emancipation from the media Emancipation from the government Emancipation from the shackles conformity lays upon us Let your voice be heard Let your soul speak Let the fear of ridicule disappear Let the fear of being beaten disappear Let this simple message free you You are powerless without the knowledge of yourself
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05-07-2006, 01:16 PM
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Well done poems. My favorite is "My facade" but true elements was a close second.
Keep writing so I can keep reading. *Vanishies in a puff of noobs*
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05-08-2006, 12:39 PM
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Re: Preludes of Insanity (A collection of Poems)
Heh, thank you. I will get to our thread soon.
 I just have a bit of poetry need, to get over something. I will try soon to post.
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05-11-2006, 12:33 AM
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Re: Preludes of Insanity (A collection of Poems)
Here is one I wrote not too long ago. (Like two or three days ago..)
I cant write I cant speak I cant think. I cant remember my self All that happens when I try do to these things Is that I write about you I speak about you I think about you And I remember myself with you I am left un-whole I am left merely an extension of you An extension cut off from the body A useless piece without you You left me un-whole A mere fragment incapable of doing more Incapable of doing anything else but writing of you Incapable of doing anything else but speaking of you Incapable of doing anything else but thinking of you Incapable of doing anything else but remembering me with you I am a broken promise I am a broken heart I am a soul cleaved in two I am a fragment of a dream for tomorrow left incomplete A promise to be together A heart that we shared A soul that we created A dream we wove in anticipation of our future The promise you broke The heart you shattered The soul you tore The dream you set on fire All this completed by being unsure All this completed by walking into something without clear intentions All this completed by your grief over another All this completed by using me as your blanket All this completed by leaving me hanging not knowing what to do Not knowing what to write Not knowing what to say Not knowing what to think Not knowing what to remember of myself But can you please remember me Can you please remember the promise Can you share our hearts once again Can you nurture the soul to become whole Can you guide me in reweaving our dream Can you please love me Love me like I love you
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05-14-2006, 03:41 AM
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Re: Preludes of Insanity (A collection of Poems)
Any comments. please?
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05-16-2006, 12:36 AM
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Re: Preludes of Insanity (A collection of Poems)
Here is a new one..
Shadows of My Self By Kyle Peltier See through the ill placed illusion, See past my crazed delusions, See into my soul wrought with confusion, See all the faces accusing. See that all you know of me is an illusion, a set of lies to protect myself, A delusion created to be worthy of your love, Confusion you instilled upon my soul, The faces that accuse me because of my love for you. You can only see the real me, If you destroy your own illusion, Banish your own delusions, and stop all your accusing. Because you are the one who is loosing With your lack of choosing, Your silence brutally bruising, The one who listens silently to all your musings. You take me for granted. Like a beautiful spring flower you planted, Choosing when to shower me with your bright rays of sun And when you are bored, all you say is that you are done. You throw me to the curb with an Im sorry I lead you on Well, I am sick of this! It has gone on for far too long. In the morning I will be gone. Then what will you say. Where is my muse? Where is my flower? Where is my love that I need in this hard hour? Where were you? Where were you I needed you. You made promises, never followed through. Now your hurt, how can this be true. You say you depended on me? Hell, I depended on you. But when I leaned, I merely fell though. Your truth, evanescent more than the morning dew. The only right way to end this poem and get my message to you, is to end with Screw you!
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05-16-2006, 06:09 PM
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Re: Preludes of Insanity (A collection of Poems)
i liked this one, good rhym scheme and a ok message. The ending made me laugh though.
(Note:I will try to get to our battle today I have been sick and that make it hard it concentratre.) (Note2: Be patient with replies they will come soon enough) (Note3:No grammer was actually harmed in the making of this post.)
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06-07-2006, 09:29 PM
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Wow your good at this... I like them alot. Keep up whatever it is that allows you to write stuff as good is this. (sounds wierd)
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07-17-2006, 07:59 PM
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Lol thank you. I now have a deviant art account for all that wish to visit me there. It is Kyle-Peltier
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07-31-2006, 04:52 PM
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Re: Preludes of Insanity (A collection of Poems)
Tears of a Shattered Tomorrow
I sit in awe And look in the mirror I watch the dewdrops fall from my nose 1… As strong as the last But so evanescent it is now in the past 2… As bright as a tear Confirming my latest fear That the future I foretold, Is now growing near 3… Can’t you see? The turmoil in the eternal sea Rising from it be not me but he 4… Hurry now, Close the door. I can’t hand it all anymore. I sit in awe And look in the mirror I watch the dewdrops fall from my nose 1…Wait… I said a 1,2,3 No, 1,2 1,2 1,2,3,4 Just soar I sit in awe And look in the mirror I watch the dewdrops fall from my nose A stream now Continuous Unstoppable A sigil of our doom I cry in enmity And look in the mirror I watch the dewdrops fall from my nose They pool A clear center In a sea of red Growing larger as the blood trails Traveling out of my head I sing in desperation And look in the mirror I watch the dewdrops fall from my nose I fall helpless Broken Battered Beaten I bleed in breathless silence And look in the mirror I watch the dewdrops fall from my nose He has risen, Free And he will conquer, Undeterred And all shall fall, Helpless Until the moon falls to the earth, Forgotten I die in centripetal totality And the mirror shatters You watch the dewdrops fall For all eternity
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08-04-2006, 09:02 AM
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It was good- but deserved a better rhyme pattern. A rhyme patter would've made it seem more fluint. I liked it though.
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08-04-2006, 02:45 PM
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Re: Preludes of Insanity (A collection of Poems)
When I write poetry, I dont plan anything out. I write what is in me, I dont analysize it, I dont plan it out. It is the spontinuity of my emotions and thoughts, a streaming jumble of words that just flow from my mouth, and then I write it down, fixing it where I see fit.
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08-04-2006, 07:42 PM
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 But anyways, I love how you acuatlly know what poetry trully is meant to be read- through the mouth. Most people think poetry was mean't to be read- WRONG. It was mean't to be spoken from when it was a first made. Quote:
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08-12-2006, 04:04 PM
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Re: Preludes of Insanity (A collection of Poems)
 Thanks.Here be a song I wrote! In need of a title, By Kyle Peltier Heavy feet fall silently, on turf made of ancient blood, Eternal flower of the heavens, Oh great glorious sun. Crimson flowers in the water, Oh mother what have I done... Now I stand in breathless silence, in omniscient finality, Kiss of heaven be on your lips, My spirit lingering... My spirit lingering... Tears and blood fall alike, From my tainted cheek. Come back to me my love, You’re which what I seek. Rapturous moments hold us tightly, Why you don’t you love me.. Now I stand in breathless silence, in omniscient finality, Kiss of heaven be on your lips, My spirit lingering... My spirit lingering... I want but a moment, As memories cannot keep. Just hold me a little closer, Come back to me I scream! Oh, come back to me! Now I stand in breathless silence, in omniscient finality, Kiss of heaven be on your lips, My spirit lingering... My spirit lingering... I can’t see through your eyes, So tell me what you see. Am I really here? Is this reality? I can’t take this pain, Please save me! Now I stand in breathless silence, in omniscient finality, Kiss of heaven be on your lips, My spirit lingering... My spirit lingering... My eyes are shut tightly, I can hear you breathe. Your chest falling slightly, right under me. I kiss your lips lightly, you tell me you love me. Now I stand in breathless silence, in omniscient finality, Kiss of heaven be on your lips, My spirit lingering... My spirit lingering... The wilted flower turns, right into sand. How could you give, Such harsh demands. All I ever wanted, WAS YOU TO UNDERSTAND! WAS YOU TO UNDERSTAND! Now I stand in breathless silence, in omniscient finality, Kiss of heaven be on your lips, My spirit lingering... My spirit lingering... Oh, oh.. My spirit lingering... And no, no one can use it... I wrote it as a gift for the person I am in love with, so that person can use it in his band.
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05-03-2007, 05:42 PM
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Re: Preludes of Insanity (A collection of Poems)
Well thank you. I guess that I can post something else here in a tad.. I have not posted anything here for a while... xD
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05-03-2007, 05:54 PM
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I didn't really like any of them but from what I see and how much you're inspired it sounds like you are really inspired.
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05-06-2007, 07:49 PM
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Re: Preludes of Insanity (A collection of Poems)
Ok.. I thank you?
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