Breakfast at My House

I'm making this comic with drawings that I created by myself, I already have the plot in my journal, I just wanted to get this comic up their, so I can get ready.
PLease tell me if I'm doing something wrong, in the most ugliest talk as possible, so I know excactly what I need to improve, and DON'T talk about the drawing, because the drawings are to suppose to suck, and look like ten-year old drew it ...

( please post if you like it, and if not; post ... )

EPISODEone/ D&D Night: PART ONE: OGRE!!!
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EPISODEtwo/ D&D Night: PART TWO; SEXY WOOD ELF
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EPISODEthree/ What?: PART ONE: What does that mean?
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EPISODEfour/ What?: PART TWO: Oui Oui Regarder ce que j'ai trouvé !
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