Midori u and your friend have done a lot to improve my writing, so instead of posting and improving my errors each chapter I've started the story from chapter one again. This time I even coped out Hiroshi! I kept rose, but just the name. Her characterr is almost an exact opposite! I've also worked heavily on description for waterbending, just check it out and you'll see what I mean!

Check your fanfic thread when you log on. I dont want my editing to go to waste D:

Meh, they aren't being as mean and some of the advice is a little helpfull as far as writing. Besides, how can we say we're more mature if we act like them? And besides that I prefer using my death star cannon....AH darn rebel alliance!?

Hi, zfan. Are people still criticizing you so I can kill them with lightbulbs?

Ahh sweet victory! (JK)

oh really...hmm thas pathetic, seriously just stop. You are like a nat dude, that's pretty good concidering some other things I'd like to call you. True failiors often run around calling other people failiors, so if that's wat you're doing wat does that make you?

Also, stop posting pictures of yourself on my page

no offence, but thas more retarded than your bawww picture..and the only fail here is you. your insults aren't working so XD

like I said, try to come up with something more origional...if that's even possible. You just keep using the same crap over and over.

"mama luigi" ugh...and you think my combacks are lame? please, go wast ur time somewhere else.