Yay! More improvement! I can see while I'm writing it that I'm improving, which is good. I'll be sure to look into that thread, but i've gotta log off now.

I just posted the first part of his beggining in this world. There're two things that brought him into the world: exhaustion and a mystical force changing the odds.. I've also thought up a name of the grand boss: The nightmare child It's taken form Dr Who, but It's fits with epic win.

Which way do you reccomend? Also, I'm having trouble describing things. It's my first fanfic, so I'm trying to get good descriptions etc, but it's hard. Take something I'm familiar with, like Ice hockey. I can do a good description of that: He glided swiftly over the slick Ice like a phantom out of a fog, and carrered into an opposing player, throwing him out the way, securing a goal as well as a penalty. But I find it hard writing about my fanfic, becuase the story comes out of my mind, not around something else. Except for the characters etc. I hope you understand. It's a bit complicated.

I would think so. It depends what the scenery's like. If it's totally different, obviously something's wrong, so he'll notice and theorise.

I wonder why they're waiting?

Nope, just a bunch of specials this year. :|

Yeah, Tennant will be gone in 2010. The new guy doesn't even look like a Doctor. >_>

Oh, I couldn't agree more. Well, there are some other episodes that are great too, but Blink really stood out.

I'm gonna miss Ten. :<

I'm having a bit of trouble shaping up the chapter though. Once he's in a coma, he's on anotherplain of reality. But I can't think where it is set.

I can also boil an egg at thirty paces.

Whether you want it or not, actually, so I've learned to stay away from hens. It's not pretty when they blow.