Yeah no problem any feedback is appreciated. Thats if Puck grades it lol, I got told to put spaces between paragraphs, something I've never done, what a newbish mistake to make.
Yeah, just wanted to let you know that I looked at your training thread, and did a non-teacher grading of it. If you want to see it I can show you, but I think it's best you don't change any of the details mentioned in what I wrote unless Puck mentions it too. What do you think? I think it would be best if I PMed it to you and you didn't look at it until after Puck's graded it. :/