I love classic line theories! Some things I don't agree with, but there's nothing actually impossible from how I see.. It's a bit awkward to read as you explain all the lines one after the other, but as far as it was understandable it's ok!
Couple of things (though they're unimportant really) Ganondorf can't have started the Fierce Wars, Ocarina implies that he helped the King stop them explaining his allegiance and trust in
OoT.
2- this is personal, try razing it a bit. You have lots of wars where there need only be one. I perhaps take this too far on my timeline and try to combine too many, but you go the other way and there are so many things that seem to be there only to explain the most unimportant of backstory which can easily be applied to bigger things. Look through the events and see which wars mentioned could be the same and which have to be different.